Can't believe everyone bailed on sports. I was gonna do one about synchronized swimming. Except it was gonna have lesbian sex and murder and very little actual swimming.

Quoted from MarkItZero Can't believe everyone bailed on sports. I was gonna do one about synchronized swimming. Except it was gonna have lesbian sex and murder and very little actual swimming.

That's cool. Mines was gonna have the same thing except the synchronization was gonna be a circle jerk. And they do swim. I was gonna call it blood sport.

Not blood spurt?

Quoted from Scar Tissue Films Not blood spurt?

No. There's a bucket involved.  

Quoted from MarkItZero Can't believe everyone bailed on sports. I was gonna do one about synchronized swimming. Except it was gonna have lesbian sex and murder and very little actual swimming.

That prolly happens now in that 'sport' lol.

Always thought synchronized water polo with horses would be fun to watch

I've got a few scripts left to read but I'm done in for today. I'll finish them tomorrow and then vote. So far I've a few goods but no very good or excellent, hoping that will change tomorrow!

I thought about two crack addicts wanting to get into boxing - you know, on purpose, but then decided against them. And I got SF, wrote about a crack addict spying on his clone dad and didn't submit. Cuz too much of it was about crack and Im not one of the Coen's brothers.

I have an interesting question - is a girl's sex with a doll considered to be lesbian sex? People don't go over the top crazy with female characters. And if it was about men there would be dolls. or talks about dolls. I mean big inflated things.

Quoted from khamanna I have an interesting question - is a girl's sex with a doll considered to be lesbian sex? People don't go over the top crazy with female characters. And if it was about men there would be dolls. or talks about dolls. I mean big inflated things.

Yes. A sex doll is simply an artificial mate for the male or female.

The other part makes me think of my real original script where I was paying homage to Japanese Visual Novels and dating sims. It was actually very unsettling because there was a lot of one-sided sexual acts and BDSM. (note: most VN that are erotic follow the same formula but with women) I decided against it bc it freaked me out lol

Quoted from Female Gaze I decided against it bc it freaked me out lol

You have to read Pia's mime script or watch as it was filmed and the link posted here. A man has sex with a mime there and that part reads very sensual.

That's probably the weirdest script on the site - I mean in a good way)

Quoted from khamanna You have to read Pia's mime script or watch as it was filmed and the link posted here. A man has sex with a mime there and that part reads very sensual. That's probably the weirdest script on the site - I mean in a good way)

I'll def check it out. WE need more sexualized male-driven scripts to be fair.  

Right that's everything read and commented upon... when do we vote?

Quoted from Female Gaze I'll def check it out.

It was actually a ventriloquist puppet and a mime.

Quoted from Female Gaze WE need more sexualized male-driven scripts to be fair.

I've written lots of those.

Quoted from Grandma Bear It was actually a ventriloquist puppet and a mime. I've written lots of those.

puppets are scary.

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All finished, voted, AND read through this thread (all ten pages worth)!



Some of my favorites (besides mine) were Rebirth, Meeting the Other Woman, Life on a Dime, Poultice, All That Glitters, Retribution Ridge, Don't Stop Believing (Hold on to that feeeling  ), Fifty, and Into That Goodnight. FWMTM and Anita Blackman made me laugh. There were more good ones than clunkers, for me.

I have a whopping 9 Excellents, 2 or 3 Very Goods, and I think 2 Goods.

4 Poors. and one measly Fair.

Quoted from AnthonyCawood Right that's everything read and commented upon... when do we vote?

http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-0117OWC/m-1485620048/

Or better yet

http://simplyscripts.com/WritersChoice-Jan-17-OWC.html