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No title yet. Any suggestions? Logline: After Satan's cell phone ends up in the hands of a couple stoners, all hell breaks loose as the forces of darkness come against them to get it back.
I like this one, as long as you keep it from being too similar to many other stoner movies. The "Satan" angle helps.
I got nothing for the title. I'm horrible at titles.
This looks like it could work, but I worry you'll run into a lot of potential plot holes if you aren't careful. First: who would even want to sell him the cellphone in the first place? What's the motivation?
Not to mention you would have to do some research on the locations/etc. unless you're familiar with this kinda stuff already.
This one is decent, but aside from the geocaching angle (I didn't even know what that was before you told me), it's not that different than a lot of other ideas here.
This looks like it could work, but I worry you'll run into a lot of potential plot holes if you aren't careful. First: who would even want to sell him the cellphone in the first place? What's the motivation?
Not to mention you would have to do some research on the locations/etc. unless you're familiar with this kinda stuff already.
Will, thanks for the feedback--I agree it would take a lot of research for something like that, which is why I might consider moving it instead to the U.S. and making the terrorists U.S. based. The motivation for selling it would be to shift blame to another person or organization. But that needs to be thought through. I may be unable to pull this off before the challenge ends, however.
I agree the other one probably needs a change of direction. I like the geocaching angle, because it's easy to incorporate the phone angle. Maybe the guy starts finding bodies--victims of a serial killer. That might be a little different.
Gary
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Bounty (TV Pilot) -- Top 1% of discoverable screenplays on Coverfly I'll Be Seeing You (short) - OWC winner The Gambler (short) - OWC winner Skip (short) - filmed Country Road 12 (short) - filmed The Family Man (short) - filmed The Journeyers (feature) - optioned
The Elevator Most Belonging To Alice - Semi Final Bluecat, Runner Up Nashville Inner Journey - Page Awards Finalist - Bluecat semi final Grieving Spell - winner - London Film Awards. Third - Honolulu Ultimate Weapon - Fresh Voices - second place IMDb link... http://www.imdb.com/name/nm7062725/?ref_=tt_ov_wr
I agree the other one probably needs a change of direction. I like the geocaching angle, because it's easy to incorporate the phone angle. Maybe the guy starts finding bodies--victims of a serial killer. That might be a little different.
The like the "average guy finding bodies" part. That's not something you see a lot in serial killer scripts.
The Elevator Most Belonging To Alice - Semi Final Bluecat, Runner Up Nashville Inner Journey - Page Awards Finalist - Bluecat semi final Grieving Spell - winner - London Film Awards. Third - Honolulu Ultimate Weapon - Fresh Voices - second place IMDb link... http://www.imdb.com/name/nm7062725/?ref_=tt_ov_wr
The Elevator Most Belonging To Alice - Semi Final Bluecat, Runner Up Nashville Inner Journey - Page Awards Finalist - Bluecat semi final Grieving Spell - winner - London Film Awards. Third - Honolulu Ultimate Weapon - Fresh Voices - second place IMDb link... http://www.imdb.com/name/nm7062725/?ref_=tt_ov_wr
The Elevator Most Belonging To Alice - Semi Final Bluecat, Runner Up Nashville Inner Journey - Page Awards Finalist - Bluecat semi final Grieving Spell - winner - London Film Awards. Third - Honolulu Ultimate Weapon - Fresh Voices - second place IMDb link... http://www.imdb.com/name/nm7062725/?ref_=tt_ov_wr
I think you can team up. I mean we're helping each other with ideas.
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I'm going with my idea, Phone Buddy. What I could do with is example films where...
# A character or thing, animal, comes to life - by magic etc
# It turns into a buddy movie
# The characters clash like hell - chalk and cheese
# but it can't go on - ie not men who become mates, eg Planes trains automobiles
I feel as if there should hundreds of these but I can't think of the now - long day.
Thoughts
Do these all have to be in one movie?
Some of my scripts:
Bounty (TV Pilot) -- Top 1% of discoverable screenplays on Coverfly I'll Be Seeing You (short) - OWC winner The Gambler (short) - OWC winner Skip (short) - filmed Country Road 12 (short) - filmed The Family Man (short) - filmed The Journeyers (feature) - optioned