Welcome to the May, 2015 One Week Challenge:

You must write one script (properly formatted)^* between 5 to 12 pages (courier 12 point font) on this month's theme:

Theme: Open
Genre: Open
Location: An Elevator or Lift (a moving platform or cage for carrying passengers or freight from one level to another, as in a building.)

The story must take place in and/or around an elevator. Low/No budget.

So, what does this have to do with Message in a Bottle by The Police?  The key word is "Bottle" as in Bottle Episode as used in episodic television wherein the episode uses minimal sets, effects and actors.

The scripts are due on Saturday, May 23rd at 11:59PM EST and must be submitted to: SimplyScripts.Com/OWC..

Timeline:
May 23rd at 11:59PM EST - Scripts are due.
May 27th or sooner scripts will be posted
June 6th at 5:00PM EST - Names and writer's choice revealed.

The Rules:

Everything must take place in and/or around an elevator.  There is no genre restriction.

The Gist:

5 - 12 pages.
Properly formatted & saved as a PDF file.
This isn't a contest. There are no prizes.
Free to submit.
One entry per person.
No pissers, please (in other words, please take this seriously).
You can revise your script as many times as you wish up until 11:59PM EST on May 23rd.
You must be a member of the discussion board. Please Contact Me and ask to join.
Please put © 2015 on your title page.

Participants are strongly encouraged to read and comment on/review the scripts submitted. Seriously, if other people take the time to read them and you submitted, you can too.

Do not put your real name on your script. However, please use your real name and discussion board name when submitting your script. (After the challenge closes you can either have your script removed or resubmit with your script with your name on it.


^*Trelby and Celtx offer free screenwriting software.  Many industry professionals use Final Draft.  If you are just starting out, Trelby and Celtx are fine.  Save as PDF file.

Nice and open theme and genre.

To you guys an Elevator is a 'lift' to us Ozzies/English, right? Just clarifying. Yep, first stupid question.

And btw, Don - is 'the geist' some sort of play on, or hybrid of 'gist' and the 'zeitgeist'? Or did your auto-correct just throw a wobbly?  

Love the lack of too many restrictions.

Quoted from LC Nice and open theme and genre. To you guys an Elevator is a 'lift' to us Ozzies/English, right? Just clarifying. Yep, first stupid question. And btw, Don - is 'the geist' some sort of play on, or hybrid of 'gist' and the 'zeitgeist'? Or did your auto-correct just throw a wobbly?   Love the lack of too many restrictions.

LC,

To clarify, yes:  "An Elevator or Lift (a moving platform or cage for carrying passengers or freight from one level to another, as in a building.) "

and, yes.  I meant "Gist" as in "The essence or main point"

Thanks Don, and yep, I was just being a bit cheeky with 'gist' thing. I'll get back in my own cage now.

Quoted from LC Thanks Don, and yep, I was just being a bit cheeky with 'gist' thing. I'll get back in my own cage now.

LC,

Thanks for the catch.  I appreciate that.

Don

Geez, really? I already wrote mine, but it was about shoe lifts. Things that elevate you. Make you taller. I guess I'll toss that 13 pager on the trash heap.

Sounds great.  Good job on this open ended challenge.

Lots of features come to mind that were mainly set in an elevator, so a short shouldn't be much of a stretch.

Hate to hear no pissers, though, but I guess I better play fair here.

Good luck to all who enter, and as The Don noted, please be prepared to read other scripts. It's only fair, so be fair, eh?  

Not having a grizzle but open themes are just that. Open...   A few restrictions would be nice and produce more interesting scripts IMO.

Quoted from stevie Not having a grizzle but open themes are just that. Open...   A few restrictions would be nice and produce more interesting scripts IMO.

I thought that the location (a moving platform or cage for carrying passengers or freight from one level to another, as in a building) would be a sufficiently annoying limitation that I left the theme and genre open.  

Don

Damn.
So much for my ship in the rum bottle idea.

Quoted from Don I thought that the location (a moving platform or cage for carrying passengers or freight from one level to another, as in a building) would be a sufficiently annoying limitation that I left the theme and genre open.   Don

I hear ya Don. A requirement of a chick in a wheelchair or a shark or urban legend would be nice though.

Hmm, hang on...could be some good ideas there lol

Did I miss something?

What does an elevator or lift have to do with a message in a bottle?

Am I on crack?

I know you say bottle episode.  What if we, like Libby, doesn't know what a bottle episode is?  

Okay, it isn't Libby.  It's Pia.  She asked me to ask you.

Lied again, it's me.  

You mean like a play stage if the play was to be recorded?  So, I can't have a lift to Hell b/c there is no way to show that with no budget.  Is that what you mean?

Or should I take more pain meds?

Thanks
Dan

Quoted from DanC Did I miss something?You mean like a play stage if the play was to be recorded?  So, I can't have a lift to Hell b/c there is no way to show that with no budget.  Is that what you mean?;

Don likes being cryptic in the lead up. If you can show 'hell' on a minimal budget, small cast etc., then hell, yes, you can do it.

Quoted from Dan Or should I take more pain meds?

I think the problem might be too many pain meds.   Carry on.

Oooooh may be able to have a stab at this.

One annoying part is that I already have a script set only in a lift/elevator - which I won't use - so I'll have to shake that story line out of my head.

Now, where could that lift be taking you??

Dan, a bottle episode in TV parlance is one where - maybe to save money or because the writers are having a blank week - the ep is set up in such a way so the set has minimal props, budget etc. numerous sitcoms have these 'cheat' eps. Flashbacks to older episodes are a good example, dream sequences where the chars reminisce about their previous happenings.

An episode of a sitcom or regular series where the chars are stuck in a lift is another good example. A lot of the snows from the 70's and 80's have at least one bottle ep per season. Maybe not so much now.

The bottle refers to them being stuck in a bottle or being bottled up for that ep so that minimal stuff has to be used. Hope that clears it up lol

I'll do this only if I manage to collect all of my energie for my NYWIFT script rewrite. I must do that one first.
Which leaves me with one or two days. Which means the script will be full of it... you know what.

Good luck to everyone.

LC, I'm glad it's not about blonde men (not into them as well), although it could be two blondes in an elevator...

Hi Guys, and girls,
     thanks for letting me know.  You know what makes this really hard, and I did some research on this last night.  Most bottle episodes that occur happen within a certain reference.  In other words, the writers know what the plan is.

Star trek was famous for them.  They knew they had the entire ship to work with.  Other sitcoms knew they could use the school gym or something like that.

Without any "framework" for the series you are working on, it's really hard to create a series in your mind, then create the bottle from that series.

I could easily put an episode of Friends in this set up.  Or Buffy.  

I wish we had a frame of what the series was like.  If this is supposed to be "real life" we'd know what series we are writing for, right?

Dan

ps Libby, the Pain meds are "fun"  yeah, I hate them.  But, the pain isn't optional, it's too much for any human to deal with.

Quoted from khamanna I'll do this only if I manage to collect all of my energie for my NYWIFT script rewrite. I must do that one first. Which leaves me with one or two days. Which means the script will be full of it... you know what. Good luck to everyone. LC, I'm glad it's not about blonde men (not into them as well), although it could be two blondes in an elevator...

What are you working on?  If you need anything read, feel free to send me an email.  I'd be happy to read it for you.

Good luck
Dan

Quoted from DanC Hi Guys, and girls,      thanks for letting me know.  You know what makes this really hard, and I did some research on this last night.  Most bottle episodes that occur happen within a certain reference.  In other words, the writers know what the plan is. Star trek was famous for them.  They knew they had the entire ship to work with.  Other sitcoms knew they could use the school gym or something like that. Without any "framework" for the series you are working on, it's really hard to create a series in your mind, then create the bottle from that series. I could easily put an episode of Friends in this set up.  Or Buffy.   I wish we had a frame of what the series was like.  If this is supposed to be "real life" we'd know what series we are writing for, right? Dan ps Libby, the Pain meds are "fun"  yeah, I hate them.  But, the pain isn't optional, it's too much for any human to deal with.

I feel you're overthinking this Dan. Look at what is required as Don put up. The restrictions are minimal. Write the story, that's the important part within the setting and low budget/small cast in mind.

I haven't written a OWC script in a loooong time, BUT...I got it all planned out last night. It came to me like a homesick puppy. So, I'm in!

You know it will be dark. Some, or maybe even loads of violence. Sex. Well, duh! And, of course a twist!...Or maybe it'll be a nice little childrens' story. Or old people stranded in a stuck elevator while one of them is dying. Or maybe a gay comedy. You just just never know!   MWUAHAHAHAHA!!!!!

Quoted from DanC Hi Guys, and girls,      thanks for letting me know.  You know what makes this really hard, and I did some research on this last night.  Most bottle episodes that occur happen within a certain reference.  In other words, the writers know what the plan is. Star trek was famous for them.  They knew they had the entire ship to work with.  Other sitcoms knew they could use the school gym or something like that. Without any "framework" for the series you are working on, it's really hard to create a series in your mind, then create the bottle from that series. I could easily put an episode of Friends in this set up.  Or Buffy.   I wish we had a frame of what the series was like.  If this is supposed to be "real life" we'd know what series we are writing for, right? Dan ps Libby, the Pain meds are "fun"  yeah, I hate them.  But, the pain isn't optional, it's too much for any human to deal with.

You are writing a low to no budget, 5 to 12 page script of any genre set in/or around an elevator.


That's it.

You really do not need to conceptualise an entire series in your head.

Quoted from Grandma Bear I haven't written a OWC script in a loooong time, BUT...I got it all planned out last night. It came to me like a homesick puppy. So, I'm in! You know it will be dark. Some, or maybe even loads of violence. Sex. Well, duh! And, of course a twist!...Or maybe it'll be a nice little childrens' story. Or old people stranded in a stuck elevator while one of them is dying. Or maybe a gay comedy. You just just never know!   MWUAHAHAHAHA!!!!!

Yeah...what she said...same for me.  

Quoted from Grandma Bear I haven't written a OWC script in a loooong time, BUT...I got it all planned out last night. It came to me like a homesick puppy. So, I'm in! You know it will be dark. Some, or maybe even loads of violence. Sex. Well, duh! And, of course a twist!...Or maybe it'll be a nice little childrens' story. Or old people stranded in a stuck elevator while one of them is dying. Or maybe a gay comedy. You just just never know!   MWUAHAHAHAHA!!!!!

Or maybe, ALL OF IT, TOGETHER. COMBINED.  Now that's a MUHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH coughs, wait, coughing now, can't breathe.  Really can'....can......no...br
passed out

Back now.

Hey Pia, how's the script coming along?  Were my ideas any help to you at all?  I love the concept.

Dan

Am I the only one who is stuck for an idea on this one? I guess I can't come up with something for the sake of coming up with something.

I need a little bit of investment.

Quoted from Max Am I the only one who is stuck for an idea on this one? I guess I can't come up with something for the sake of coming up with something. I need a little bit of investment.

Nope, you are not alone.

My ideas are either too stupid, or far too involved.  I'm having an issue thinking of anything good.  If I knew I was doing this for Star Trek, or CSI or SHIELD, or even Good Wife, then I'd have a better idea.

What throws me off is the series related bottle, which are done in series.  This is a stand alone with no real purpose other then to be a stand alone with no direction.

It's hard to think of something good to great, in 5-12 pages.

Dan

The message in a bottle hint was as obscure as it gets. Well played, Don.

I like the topic. Got nothing so far, but I like it. No crazy boundaries and very indie-friendly. I reckon at least a few will eventually get produced this OWC.

Good luck all -- and to Khamanna with the NYF..T...something rewrite. If you need another pair of eyes to look over it, feel free to drop me a PM.

Coming up with a good to great idea in less than 12 hours is pretty difficult to impossible, in reality.

Take your time, peeps.  No rush here...we've a whole week, and once you have your idea, the actual writing should be a breeze.

Do I have a good idea?  No.  Do I have any ideas?  Well, yeah...a script set in some sort of elevator.  I'll just take it from there.

I'd like to commit to the OWC, but the idea I have... without giving anything away, are we allowed to do a script that takes place in/on a LIFT that's NOT in a building but outside?

Quoted from Dreamscale Yeah...what she said...same for me.

Jeff Bush - covered in honey - stuck in a lift with a bunch of gay St Louis Rams fans....

Quoted from Leegion I'd like to commit to the OWC, but the idea I have... without giving anything away, are we allowed to do a script that takes place in/on a LIFT that's NOT in a building but outside?

The location is elevator/lift. If the elevator/lift exists outside a building, it seems it would fall within the parameters of the exercise.

Don

Quoted from DanC What throws me off is the series related bottle, which are done in series.  This is a stand alone with no real purpose other then to be a stand alone with no direction. It's hard to think of something good to great, in 5-12 pages. Dan

Dan,

It has been explains twice before and perhaps you are not getting it.

Let me emphasize the challenge,

Write a script between 5 to 12 pages that takes place in and/or around an elevator. Low/No budget.  

That is it.  This challenge has nothing to do with any series or any bottle.  

Quoted from Grandma Bear I haven't written a OWC script in a loooong time, BUT...I got it all planned out last night. It came to me like a homesick puppy. So, I'm in! You know it will be dark. Some, or maybe even loads of violence. Sex. Well, duh! And, of course a twist!...Or maybe it'll be a nice little childrens' story. Or old people stranded in a stuck elevator while one of them is dying. Or maybe a gay comedy. You just just never know!   MWUAHAHAHAHA!!!!!

This brings a certain AEROSMITH song to mind

Quoted from eldave1 This brings a certain AEROSMITH song to mind

Pia Got A Gun?

Quoted from stevie Pia Got A Gun?

Love in an Elevator - although I like yours better.

I got some ideas rambling around. Finding a logline is going to be the more challenging. I can say that peeps are going to hate me for writing my entry, and thus might hate the script too. What else is new. The way things are looking though, I'm actually considering to ask for possible collaboration, because I want this thing to be that much better.,

Are teamups allowed in this OWC?

I finished mine, guys! Will tweak during the week, but feeling pretty good about it so far! I love shorts! I miss them! If someone would just pay me to write shorts all day, I'd be in heaven!

Dan, yes, I appreciated your suggestions for SLEEP. I got a LOT of suggestions from people and I think in a way, that actually messed me up. <it made me doubt my own ideas and brought me to a halt. I'm taking a break from it for a couple of days to finish this OWC and my conspiracy thriller.

For what it's worth, everyone LOVES the concept of SLEEP! It's a winner, I know it, if I can just get it right.  

Quoted from DarrenJamesSeeley I got some ideas rambling around. Finding a logline is going to be the more challenging. I can say that peeps are going to hate me for writing my entry, and thus might hate the script too. What else is new. The way things are looking though, I'm actually considering to ask for possible collaboration, because I want this thing to be that much better., Are teamups allowed in this OWC?

Yes, teamups are allowed.

Quoted from Don Yes, teamups are allowed.

But no teacups? Darn!

BTW

Quoted Text "There is no genre restriction."

Be careful how that can be interpreted.  
Anyway, as for my entry, if anyone is still having troubles and wish to add to my own,   message me.  
Just know who you will be dealing with...
But I'll need to know by Tuesday if you are in.

I've written three high concept ten-page TV ideas and synopses during the past week and am writing another. Not sure I have any creative juice left. I'm well due a week away from writing so may have to back out of this one.

Quoted from DustinBowcot I've written three high concept ten-page TV ideas and synopses during the past week and am writing another. Not sure I have any creative juice left. I'm well due a week away from writing so may have to back out of this one.

I doubt I could manage that if there was a gun to my head. Especially if someone else was holding it.

I have thought of three ideas for this elevator business though. The first was rubbish. The second was dull and third was frankly appalling. So, the usual type of thing then.

Ho hum.

R

Oooh a OWC! I've not taken part in the last few of these and miss them. I'd like to write something new, for the past few weeks I've just been doing re-drafts of old scripts for various film festivals and competitions.

Wouldn't it be nice if we had an official pisser contest for a change?

The OWC normally gives me some great inspiration but the openness of this is currently drawing a blank in my mind. However I'll have a think and see if I can come up with something.

Best of luck everyone, I look forward to reading these.

-Mark

No teacups?! But I had it all figured out...

Thriller - After holding a speech about their experiences in the war on Remembrance day, two grumpy old Englishmen end up stuck inside a broken elevator in a building that's not set to be visited for 7 days. Paranoia breaks out when they find out they only have enough tea to sustain one of them for a week.

I'm going to make a prediction that the OWC will have a lot of restrictions next time around. And, I think there'll be a ton of entries this go round, - a large proportion of them, horror.

Quoted from LC I'm going to make a prediction that the OWC will have a lot of restrictions next time around. And, I think there'll be a ton of entries this go round, - a large proportion of them, horror.

Agreed. I'm predicting that there will be a fair share of thrillers too.

Oh OWC time... Found out about it yesterday and we are leaving for Missouri (week vaca) tomorrow...if I wasn't the driver, I could write one on the road...perhaps I'll be able to squeeze one in Will try.

Quoted from LC I think there'll be a ton of entries this go round, - a large proportion of them, horror.

I don't know about that. Don has not mentioned this on FB nor on the SS home page. Also, there's no longer a moviepoet to announce it on either. I haven't mentioned it anywhere either because I figured if Don isn't saying anything about it, then maybe he doesn't want a ton of scripts submitted.

My take.  

Quoted from LC I'm going to make a prediction that the OWC will have a lot of restrictions next time around. And, I think there'll be a ton of entries this go round, - a large proportion of them, horror.

Yeah, this leads itself to horror, suspense, terror etc.  I can also imagine a cute love story comedy of getting stuck in an elevator, but, it'd be a snippet from a bigger movie or something.

Pale Yellow, I love your avatar.  It's creepy as all hell.  Very Exorcist-like or Weeping Angel-like from the Dr. Who series.

For those fellow Dr. Who fans, has there been a better idea in the new series then the Weeping Angels?  They are freaking awesome.  I have watched that first episode more then 6 times.

Dan

Quoted from LC I'm going to make a prediction that the OWC will have a lot of restrictions next time around. And, I think there'll be a ton of entries this go round, - a large proportion of them, horror.

Actually, I was thinking more along the lines of 50 Shades of an Elevator, but you never know.

Quoted from Don The location is elevator/lift. If the elevator/lift exists outside a building, it seems it would fall within the parameters of the exercise. Don

Sounds like my idea can participate then.  Thanks for the green light, Don.

Quoted from Grandma Bear I don't know about that. Don has not mentioned this on FB nor on the SS home page. Also, there's no longer a moviepoet to announce it on either. I haven't mentioned it anywhere either because I figured if Don isn't saying anything about it, then maybe he doesn't want a ton of scripts submitted. My take.

Pia would be correct.  Unlike the October One Week Challenge, this is advertised only on the discussion board and limited to members of the discussion board.  Trying to keep it intimate and friendly.  

- Don

Oh God. This couldn't have came at a worse time. New job has me working 7 days a week at the moment.

If I don't enter I'll try read as much as I can though.

Sounds like a good one. Thanks again, Don.

Thanks Dan(dunno where I found it somewhere on google)...and I think it's good to have a smaller challenge.

It will surely be easier to read the entries this way!

Dena, I'll know yours as soon as I read the first 1/2 page!    You know I will...right?

BWOOOHAHA!!!!!!  

Jeffie...I do not know how you always can guess mine!!!??? Tell me how you are doing it?? Tell me your secret!!! I'm going to steal your crystal ball this year! I dunno how to camouflage mine! LOL

That is...if I get to write one... I'm driving 18 hours to Missouri tomorrow ....and vacation time....so unless I write it by the pool or while hiking through the woods and who knows if there's even internet service in such place??!!

You better not be cheating...who does that!?? I mean where they do that at?? You got me?  LMAO

Quoted from Pale Yellow Jeffie...I do not know how you always can guess mine!!!???

See, that's the fun part of the old days with the OWC. It's hard to guess who wrote what when there are 35 entries, but if there's only 15 or so written by board members, the guessing game becomes an extra fun thing! I've missed that part personally.

Writers that were easy to spot in those old days were Helio, Shelton and Jordan.  

Quoted from Grandma Bear Writers that were easy to spot in those old days were Helio, Shelton and Jordan.

...and PiPi...and Dena...

Okay - first draft done - time for a beer.

Quoted from eldave1 Okay - first draft done - time for a beer.

Impressive!!  Well done.

I've got an idea, and will hopefully write it soon, as I will not be able to this weekend.

Brilliant!

I've got the beginning of an idea but not an ending. Still that hasn't stopped any writer in Hollywood getting a multi-million dollar deal so I'm going for it lol.

Quoted from DanC What are you working on?  If you need anything read, feel free to send me an email.  I'd be happy to read it for you. Good luck Dan

It's a Christmas rom com flick. Thanks, I really appreciate it!! - I need to finish working on the rewrite first if that ever happens)

I have my second draft done.  I'm gonna lose my OWC virginity.  I feel so special right now...

Congrats, Dan!

Still at INT. ELEVATOR here.

Second 1/2 draft for me. Nobody was interested in a team up, so it's all doom and gloom from here.

I've got a concept, a genre, a beginning, and an end in my head. I'll see what becomes of it.

This month's theme is intriguing and lends itself to several genres.

Quoted from Pale Yellow You better not be cheating...who does that!?? I mean where they do that at?? You got me?  LMAO

Actually, there IS a way to cheat.  But I would never, ever, ever do so.  Where would be the fun in that?    Besides, I wouldn't want to be even subliminally biased on the read by knowing!

I'm in...who will join me?

Best
Richard

Quoted from RichardR I'm in...who will join me?

I've submitted mine. Just waiting for confirmation.

I've gone from vomit draft...to ....very ugly draft...but it's on it's way ..hopefully

I've just thrown one off... and then I wrote a short. I didn't have time to write anything as earth-shattering as my usual outings, but it's something. I've gone for full on porn this time, but only when the lift is going up. When on the way down it changes to a western with horses, Indians and astronauts.

Quoted from DustinBowcot I've just thrown one off... and then I wrote a short. I didn't have time to write anything as earth-shattering as my usual outings, but it's something. I've gone for full on porn this time, but only when the lift is going up. When on the way down it changes to a western with horses, Indians and astronauts.

Sounds like a New Years party!  

I submitted yesterday, but was informed I might not meet the parameter. Most of it's on an elevator, but there's an opening scene in a room connected to the elevator. Oh well.

Quoted from JSimon I submitted yesterday, but was informed I might not meet the parameter. Most of it's on an elevator, but there's an opening scene in a room connected to the elevator. Oh well.

It may be for another reason as:

The story must take place in and/or around an elevator. Low/No budget.

It seems like an opening scene around the elevator shouldn't be an issue.

mine may be rejected for being crap

that could be a valid reason

but still, i haven't written in months so its good to be back, so to speak

I want to cry a little. I don't have time even to scratch my head this week, and I really don't want to miss this challenge. What to do?

I genuinely wasn't going to enter, working on a feature, too busy, didn't have a decent idea... usual excuses...

Then inspiration hit... written half of it tonight, rest is coalescing in my head... looks like i'll be entering afterall...

Dustin - looking forward to yours, Western section obviously

I haven't been active on SS in a very long time, so I had thought my submission would be *extra* anonymous. Then I realized that I was going to read and review as many submissions as I could and, well, you people aren't dummies (okay, there's always a few ) many of you would probably have assumed that I had submitted something - I might as well admit it.

I haven't yet, but will very soon.

Quoted from realxwriter I want to cry a little. I don't have time even to scratch my head this week, and I really don't want to miss this challenge. What to do?

You can do both bro! Drink a cup of cement to harden the f**k up then start writing. Then scratch your head and do any other chores every 10 minutes. Works for me  

I got my concept figured out as well, it's a rather simple twist but I think it works.

Can't wait, 3 days to bang out 6 pages LOL, bring it on!

Look forward to reading your stuff.

Quoted from Max I got my concept figured out as well, it's a rather simple twist but I think it works. Can't wait, 3 days to bang out 6 pages LOL, bring it on! Look forward to reading your stuff.

6 pages?  Why stop at 6 pages?

Okay - dokay - just submitted my script (thanks for the inspiration Libby).

Off to Hawaii to visit grandsons at end of month - got to find a wifi connection for sure.

This actually has me thinking juices flowing. I may participate.

~Zack~

Quoted from eldave1 Okay - dokay - just submitted my script (thanks for the inspiration Libby). Off to Hawaii to visit grandsons at end of month - got to find a wifi connection for sure.

On ya, Dave.  
...Oh you lucky dog. Hawaii sounds great. Think I'll go some day.

Just submitted my first draft. I'll most likely tweak it when I have more time.

Good luck to everybody.

I had a title picked out, but I changed it when I got to the last page. The new title fits the script a bit more.   I must have written and rewritten the dialog a hundred times. Taking things out, putting things back in and in which order. I have already decided that regardless of the feedback, this one I will not disown. This is a keeper. In fact, iwhen I resub after the OWC with my actual name on it, I'll ask that the revision be put in the shorts section. There's some stuff in this OWC I really like.

I debated on taking the alias. You all will spot my yarn in a minute or two,  But who knows...man, I want to film this short bad. Bad. Bad. Bad.

Quoted from stevie You can do both bro! Drink a cup of cement to harden the f**k up then start writing. Then scratch your head and do any other chores every 10 minutes. Works for me

Sounds like a good plan. Thanks stevie.

Will our REAL NAME be displayed on the forum when we submit? Just curious, or will that be kept secret unless we want to reveal it?