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SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board    One Week Challenge    August 2016 One Week Challenge  ›  Bangkok, U.S.A. - OWC
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CindyLKeller
Posted: August 19th, 2016, 9:50am Report to Moderator
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Nice read at the beginning, but you lost me about half way through it.

Not sure how to comment.

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Jeremiah Johnson
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WTH did i just read?  It was weird, fun, bizarre, animated?  Not part of the challenge, I would say it's an innovative idea that still couldn't get filmed because of the budget.  As part of the challenge, the budget was to be low, and this isn't.  It also was another one trying too hard to be smart but sometimes fell short.  Fun little break from the challenge though... but wait, this was part of the challenge??


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ChrisBodily
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Confession: I came for the pizza.

A bit too trippy/psychedelic, even for me. I could totally see this with animation by Gerald Scarfe a la The Wall.

A guilty pleasure at best. Pass/consider. B-


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SimonM
Posted: August 22nd, 2016, 6:01am Report to Moderator
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Quoted from ChrisBodily

A bit too trippy/psychedelic, even for me. I could totally see this with animation by Gerald Scarfe a la The Wall.



It brought Alex Cox's "Repo Chick" to mind for me - someone send it to him, he'd probably love it!
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Hunter
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I'm not sure what I just read. It's just a problem, all over. Sorry.


I would love feedback on any of these!
Back to Class: http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-series/m-1453330945/ (comedy series, RECENTLY UPDATED DEC. '16)
Cause & Effect: http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-series/m-1472594865/ (comedy-drama series)
Waking Up: http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-series/m-1452376264/ (comedy series)
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