Die Bieber Die

A metalhead goes back in time through a cardboard wormhole purchased on Craigslist to ice Canadian musicians, one by one.  First stop, Bieber.  Lol!

Amazing premise, I chuckled numerous times throughout the read.  Writing was pretty good too.  Not much to say about it really.  I'm sure folks have already pointed out the "confidant", but other than that, it was top notch.  Great work.

Johnny

Quoted from Bill Ignore this one...bloody pisser

Total pisser

Quoted from Stevie Jeff hated the fact that I loved this script, Mark! He kept sending me emails of Bieber pictures saying I loved him. These pics were prolly from his private(s) collection

Stevie, he sent me this pm too : " You leave my Bieber alone! I would to play slap 'n' tickle with that Bieber boy"

I don't know what he means but as long as he's happy   Right, Jeff ?

Quoted from Leegion Wormhole on Craigslist, lol.  That cracked me up a bit. The script has some funny moments, a few words were misspelled, like "viola", which should've been "voila", but other than a few hiccups, it was quite humor filled and had its moments.  Good comedic effort here. I also liked the touch of the "switch"... and the crackhead in the basement. Nice funny script here, shame the plan didn't work though.

Thanks Leegion glad you liked it

Quoted from Johnny A metalhead goes back in time through a cardboard wormhole purchased on Craigslist to ice Canadian musicians, one by one.  First stop, Bieber.  Lol! Amazing premise, I chuckled numerous times throughout the read.  Writing was pretty good too.  Not much to say about it really.  I'm sure folks have already pointed out the "confidant", but other than that, it was top notch.  Great work.

Based on a true story

I sent this into the LA comedy shorts... I'll see what happens

Mark

I owed you a read.

As much as it didn't make sense, it was comical. lol. It's hard to explain but, it flowed. There's times where I was like WTF. Not the negative kind but more as I wonder where this is going.

You can go back and spread things apart since I noticed you tried to cram a lot. lol. Also, unless the bum is a crackhead, i think it should be the bum who gets to stay in John's house at the ending.

But other than that, I chuckled, visualized, and enjoyed.

Gabe