Chris. Thanks. You have an awesome insight here and it's great how you connect the characters' actions and personalities with the whole story's balance and rhythm. There's so much to learn for me here.
I'm going to answer you all soon.
That said: I see it as a series and this is the first episode here. I can imagine the audience to discover the whole killing market and its puppet masters, the political system, not to forget the world's society step by step. The characters went their ways at some point, saved me when I didn't know how to go on. I started to adore them while they brought in more and more of this odd tone and told me where to go. It doesn't feel like a feature anymore; especially with regards to goals. They are too individual to go for the big goal which should be – bring world peace, stop the lottery, nukes, change political understanding about war, and all that within two hours. At least, that's how I think at this stage of development. |