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Posted: August 1st, 2010, 9:52pm Report to Moderator
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This is from another forum in which I had a similar conversation. Low and behold, who should turn up but:


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I'm chiming in on the discussion of the hero's journey structure as one author responsible for publicizing the thing, in my book THE WRITER'S JOURNEY. Yes, I am the Chris Vogler who wrote that book. It was my attempt to open a discussion (exactly like this one) about Joseph Campbell's concept of the hero's journey in mythology, and how it could be adapted for movie story-telling. I'm glad some people find it useful in their writing and unbothered if some people don't. There are plenty of ways to think about writing and you can get on very well without ever considering the hero's journey idea for a second. In fact, in my own writing and consulting I use many other templates and languages, like the lingo, philosophy and structure of vaudeville, the military, engineering, animal behavior, fairy tales, pop songs, architecture, dance and psychology, without ever mentioning the hero's journey model.

It's an interesting game to ask is this or that movie a hero's journey, and look, I've been playing it since I first opened my mouth to talk about it. From day one people came up to me and said "But what about Movie X or Y?" that seemed to defy the model, challenging me to find a hero's journey in it. Not hard -- IF you are not taking "the hero's journey" literally as all twelve elements of my highly arbitrary outline in precisely the order I give them in the book. I never claimed that every movie has, or should have, every element of my outline in exactly that order, in fact I STRONGLY WARN AGAINST IT. Such a movie would be predictable and boring, since the audience knows the outline very well. It's the variations on the theme that they come to see, the surprising departures from the familiar model that make them think about it and experience it all over again.

I looked over the list of films that was put forward as a challenge to the ubiquity of the hero's journey. Seems like a tedious exercise to compare them point by point to a rigid, literal version of the outline, and where do you draw your line about when a story qualifies as an Official Hero's Journey Movie or is disqualified? How many departures from the precise outline are allowed before the buzzer sounds? If you say three strikes and you're out, then I would expect most or all of them would strike out, because an umpire could say "Aha! I don't see a Refusal of the Call there, a Mentor shows up in Act Three instead of Act One, and where's the big Ordeal in the middle of Act Two?" But that doesn't get us very far, because the hero's journey is so subjective. I could make the case that all we have shown is how flexible the hero's journey can be -- you can purposely omit or rearrange its steps and yet someone in the hero's journey frame of mind will still perceive it as a story with all the energy and feeling of a hero's journey. And someone who isn't in that frame of mind will not see a hero's journey there no matter how long they gaze at it. You're either on the bus or not.

Who cares anyway? The point (about writing) is utility. If it's useful, use it. If it's not useful, if it gets in your way, makes you feel handcuffed, confuses you, or just seems bogus to you, don't. There are plenty of other approaches. The rule of "What happens next?" is perfectly adequate for all screenwriting situations, as are the variations on "Get the hero up a tree, shake the tree, get him down again" cited by various contributors.

The hero's journey idea is a metaphor, and not, I hope, a cookbook recipe, a mathematical equation or a chemical formula. It's not the answer to every screenwriting problem. It's just another tool - a very versatile and useful one, I think -- in the story-teller's tool box.


The internet is ace.

Anyway, although this post is about a different template, I think the main points are still relevant.
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.. although this post is about a different template, I think the main points are still relevant.

Yes.
This is EXACTLY what I was beating the bushes and shaking trees for. "ALTERNATIVES TO".
By all means, I don't want to imply any suggestion BS'BSs are Holy writ to which transgressions deserve a good stoning/spanking or at least a toss of a spec screenplay onto the slush pile.



I like how Mike Cornetto put this:
>> My take on the whole beat sheet thing is that it is useful if you are trying to sell your script in Hollywood... If you are trying to sell your script elsewhere, then I think you probably have some leeway with structure. <<

I see a whooole lotta truth to what you said:
>> The execs are all scared of getting fired, so they try and minimise their risk by sticking to things that have been proven to work. <<
There's a whole conversation there in how this mentality may someday lead to a monoculture to be toppled. And another conversation about our cultural disservice until that happens.
Additionally, I also agree with you and Dreamscale about Snyders high holding. http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0811414/
Pfft! "Stop! Or My Mom Will Shoot" is his Biz Fanfare?
<cough, tony gilroy, cough, brian helgeland, cough, david mamet>
However, if George Lucas can make more money off merchandising than his films I don't really have a legit beef with Blake Snyder making more cabbage offa "Save The Cat" et al than "Stop! Or My Mom Will Shoot".
I bet the guy, even deceased, is making more than most of us.
Our gracious benefactor here, Don, excluded. Surely he's rolling in it.  

Anthony's bell ringer:
>> Most of the work posted here would be considered independent. And if you don't have an agent there's zero chance of getting your script made at a studio. <<
Distilled truth. Like a sip of Jack Daniels.

I posed this question not only for my own benefit but also for that of others.
As you can see there are currently 250 views (at least a dozen of which are mine) with eleven germane replies, confirmation there was some broad interest in this aspect of story & structure mechanics.

Do you wanna sell a script to Fox, WB, Columbia or Universal? Movie in a Box may be the best way to go to ensure $X00K against $X00K. Shake N bake screenplay. It's like Mad Libs for Movies!
Do you know your story's structure is... unique? The you'll know which agents to invest your time & effort shopping to.

*** Enlightened Personal Moment***
Since good writing is really re-writing, write two different versions of your feature stories.
First one should be "true art", the real story. Then write the Hollywood whore version.


I don't really wanna sound like I'm wrapping up this thread's summation already.
(Question's only been posed 72hrs.)
So, please, keep the PoVs and experiences rolling in!
Thank you, all!







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Everyone probably knows I'm not much of a tight structure writer, so here's my take on storytelling with a beat sheet outline:

If you have a good story to tell, it will naturally have a beginning, a middle and an end. It will naturally have conflict. It will naturally have a protagonist with obstacles to overcome and more obstacles to impede her/him. So by and large these elements should naturally fall where the industry expects them to fall, page wise.

If you don't have this type of story to tell at the outset, then you don't have a screenplay. You may have a novel, depending on theme, but not a script.

I find writers that have to shoehorn and spoonfeed these elements into their work at certain times and on certain pages really don't have a grip on the story they want to tell.


I couldn't agree more.

Exactly what I was thinking.

I mean, if you have been doing it for a while, you look at a few scripts, naturally you are going to adapt a sense of what is going to happen next.

The other day I wrote a 100 page screenplay in one sitting. I had that script there for a year with only an opening.

But once I focused on it, I naturally had an idea what is going to happen here, we have conflict against the loss-of-hope, and the helpful characters with the arrogant ones to create tention.

But honestly, if I am ever stuck, I just look at the 3-Act-Structure. That's the simple it can get with me, but with that Beat-Sheet it just confuses me.  


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You wrote a 100 page screenplay in a single sitting?

WOW!  Impressive...very impressive!
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Quoted from Dreamscale
You wrote a 100 page screenplay in a single sitting?

WOW!  Impressive...very impressive!


You have no idea  

This is coming from a guy who takes years just to get a 50-page screenplay lol!

But yeah, I started 10 in the morning, and ended it at 12 at night.

But it's the end of a trilogy, so that way I had an idea what to do and how to end it.

I think it was easier that way. If not, I wouldn't have gotten that far.

It's hard to keep going sometimes... Well, I do.


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Reason why Rainforests are disappearing is because of all of the useless scripts Hollywood wants everyday.
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I picked up SAVE THE CAT! the other day and I agree it is simplistic but a thoroughly enjoyable read. I brought it more for learning about typical structure so it delivers answers in that respect.

Regarding the beat sheet, it's something I have never done before but I'm using to rewrite an old script I have up here and see how it ends up. It wont be exactly how he has it, but I'll try to match it best I can to see what results it brings.

I believe his beat sheet, or any beat sheet, is just there to help. It's a blueprint of your script and working with it can only make tightening up your story that much more easier. You can spot flaws if you know where the beats lay, and if called up on why a certain part of your script doesn't work so well, if you have it locked down so tightly, it might make it that much more easier when rewriting.

I agree it is aimed more at those that really want to write a Hollywood movie, he even states so in the book. I don't know much of his writing credits and I'm not a fan of the ones I know of but I would say it's helpful and insightful to a point. I can also see others point of view about having freedom in writing and not just going along with the gang and coming up with formulaic crap.
I, like most of you guys I imagine , don't like any restraint when I try and write and that goes for structure aswell. If I believe I have a good story and can tell it in a way that can differenate from what I've seen before, I'm all for it.
It's probably one of the reasons why I like to write, so I can put across a story in movie mode that wont be too predictable in how it works. It gets to the point where you watch a movie and you can time what might happen exactly by the counter on the DVD player.
But then these are movies that have been made, and although I doubt I will ever have the satisfaction of seeing something I write become part of my DVD collection, if you stick to certain guidelines you might give yourself a better chance. I think that's really all the beat sheet is. Just a helpful hand if you need one.



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I am impressed with the thoughtful, detailed and rich emotion on this subject. Here's, for me, where the rubber hits the road; there are SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MANY writers out there WHO THINK they can write, who do NOT have one bit of sense about THE CRAFT of writing; I am talking about folks who DON'T read scripts each week (as that is the only REAL way to learn how to get your story from your head to the page), yay, I digress-so FEW out there, who can even spell, that THE BEAT SHEET ala Synder has become our agency's litmus test. Does that mean if it doesn't BEAT OUT we won't sign the writer? Uh. Duh. Of course not. But if your script DOESN'T beat out YOU MUST HAVE a great story, well CRAFTED, with narrative tug (ie I simply must turn the page to see what happens next.) IF I CAN get passionate and if I think I can shop it I will try. NO PROMISES. My clients are pros; they understand A SCRIPT IS ONE THING ONLY; A DOCUMENTED STORY TO INVITE INVITE INVITE collaboration. Unless they are going to shoot it themselves. NOTHING can exist without form really SAYS it, and says it well. HUGS to all of you for even making the effort. HERE'S A SECRET. I get to 'SEE' tons of great movies without ever leaving my house thanks to you all. And coming soon, one of my clients will do a Babz Buzz show FOR ME and let you in on THE NEXT 'BIG' thing... trust me, you WON'T want to miss it.....BB
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Thank you Babz for coming on to this forum and posting your thoughts - I think it really has helped to invigorate a lot of writers who may have been down in the doldrums and were feeling a little "meh" about things.

Looking forward to the next podcast.

Regarding the beat sheet, I think it's well worth trying out. I tried it out earlier with just a random idea and came up with a pretty solid one within a couple of hours.
It wont write the script for you, but I can see how usefull it can be.



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I was in love with storytelling in all forms since I was aware of myself. I have watched movies from 40+ (maybe 50+) countries all over the world, with different interpretations and approaches to film making and storytelling from different cultures and mindset. What I have noticed, all of them have a lot of structural similarities, which is totally expected, and just recently European and some others around the world film makers started to follow this Hollywood guide beat by beat. People who does this aim for worldwide presentation of their films and spreading their BUSINESS worldwide and Hollywood proves every year how successful they are. Some of them still don't hitting the themes that are interesting worldwide so they stay under the radar despite all the efforts, and others simply don't want to fit in and just continue doing own thing but accepting a form and structure that is proven to bring pace and dramatic experience in more entertaining way.

I don't think any of guides or beat sheet's that so called script gurus and doctors made is limiting, it still gives you creative freedom and lot of space to improvise. I started learning about screenwriting craft something like 2 years ago and after reading books and listening interviews by/with Syd Field, Robert McKee, John Truby, Blake Snyder, Michael Hauge, Peter Russell, Richard Walter and some others on YT channel Film Courage who made their way to Hollywood, it's obvious all of them writing and talking about same thing just in their own "language". You have to follow their rules if you want to play their game. They want a fruit and you are a seed. Hollywood wants banana, Asia want rice, Europe wants orange and you need to give them a proper seed to help them grow desired fruit. But, if you are really good in planting they might hire you to adjust and improve your skills for their needs even if you gave them wrong seed.
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I have watched today fantastic Hungarian Oscar winner, Son of Saul. Great storytelling, reminding of famous European film makers of 20th century but very refreshing in every way while hitting beats of Snyder's BS, much faster and grabbing than it's expected as a result.
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Wow, you dug up an old post!  But since it's about the Beat Sheets, it reminded me that if you purchase Final Draft, you get Blake Snyder's Save the Cat story structure software free.  Ends tomorrow April 30th.

I'm probably going to get it.  I've been using Trelby and like it ok, but really think I'll like using Final Draft on my ipad as well.  And NO, I don't work for the company!  


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Quoted from Darjan
I have watched today fantastic Hungarian Oscar winner, Son of Saul. Great storytelling, reminding of famous European film makers of 20th century but very refreshing in every way while hitting beats of Snyder's BS, much faster and grabbing than it's expected as a result.


The sequel could be "Better Call Son of Saul."


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Quoted from Jeremiah Johnson
Wow, you dug up an old post!  But since it's about the Beat Sheets, it reminded me that if you purchase Final Draft, you get Blake Snyder's Save the Cat story structure software free.  Ends tomorrow April 30th.

I'm probably going to get it.  I've been using Trelby and like it ok, but really think I'll like using Final Draft on my ipad as well.  And NO, I don't work for the company!  


I am a Final Draft user and am very happy with the product. That being said, I think I would not have purchased it if it came with the Save the Cat story structure.


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Quoted from Darjan
I was in love with storytelling in all forms since I was aware of myself. I have watched movies from 40+ (maybe 50+) countries all over the world, with different interpretations and approaches to film making and storytelling from different cultures and mindset. What I have noticed, all of them have a lot of structural similarities, which is totally expected, and just recently European and some others around the world film makers started to follow this Hollywood guide beat by beat. People who does this aim for worldwide presentation of their films and spreading their BUSINESS worldwide and Hollywood proves every year how successful they are. Some of them still don't hitting the themes that are interesting worldwide so they stay under the radar despite all the efforts, and others simply don't want to fit in and just continue doing own thing but accepting a form and structure that is proven to bring pace and dramatic experience in more entertaining way.

I don't think any of guides or beat sheet's that so called script gurus and doctors made is limiting, it still gives you creative freedom and lot of space to improvise. I started learning about screenwriting craft something like 2 years ago and after reading books and listening interviews by/with Syd Field, Robert McKee, John Truby, Blake Snyder, Michael Hauge, Peter Russell, Richard Walter and some others on YT channel Film Courage who made their way to Hollywood, it's obvious all of them writing and talking about same thing just in their own "language". You have to follow their rules if you want to play their game. They want a fruit and you are a seed. Hollywood wants banana, Asia want rice, Europe wants orange and you need to give them a proper seed to help them grow desired fruit. But, if you are really good in planting they might hire you to adjust and improve your skills for their needs even if you gave them wrong seed.


I would rather be beaten than use a beat sheet. Beginning - Middle - End - pretty much does the trick.


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