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Posted: December 31st, 2010, 8:44pm Report to Moderator
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Excellent work again MC.  Can't wait to see what you do with the others.  

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Congratulations, guys.


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MC,

I liked the long shot to a close up in the cemetery. I went wow!  Good job!

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Dreamscale
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Great work, Cornie!

I agree with a few others that this had a much more cinematic feel to it.  The music worked very well with the feel and flow.

BUT, I hate to say it, but I thought it was quite dull over all, story-wise.  I disliked all the V.O., and really didn't get much of anything out of it.  I don't really even recall the script itself, but I bet I had similar comments after reading it.

Oh well, as we all know, you can't please all of 'em, all of the time.  If you could, things would really get dull fast.

Great work, guys!
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This was Brilliant with a capital B.

Great job.
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