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Murder on the Simply Express - Killer Discussion (currently 33317 views)
mcornetto
Posted: November 5th, 2011, 4:25pm
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All returned to you. I only had to cut about 15 pages so you could fit it in a post, but what's left is great.
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Dreamscale
Posted: November 5th, 2011, 5:01pm
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All returned to you. I only had to cut about 15 pages so you could fit it in a post, but what's left is great.
Now that's funny! Good job, Michael.
As I said, if I'm actually up next, I most likely will need until Tuesday morning to complete my post. Is that OK?
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Sandra Elstree.
Posted: November 5th, 2011, 5:05pm
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Quoted from mcornetto
All returned to you. I only had to cut about 15 pages so you could fit it in a post, but what's left is great.
You can see I was busy.
I thought it was freakin' long, but I was reading word count, not character count.
I guess we'll have to save the party for later.
Ok, it's coming. I've worked out the camera. Pia's gonna love what she's operating now!!!
Sandra
A known mistake is better than an unknown truth.
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mcornetto
Posted: November 5th, 2011, 5:08pm
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How about if I pick someone else to go next because that will keep things moving. Then you can go after them.
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mcornetto
Posted: November 5th, 2011, 6:33pm
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Great job Sandra. Everything is all updated. darrenjames is up next. We should finally hear from C. Dreamscale is after darrenjames.
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The boy who could fly
Posted: November 6th, 2011, 12:32am
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Great job everyone! This looks like it's gonna be a hell of a trip!!!
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Zanej
Posted: November 6th, 2011, 12:34am
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Getting interesting seems like some people are up to no good.
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Electric Dreamer
Posted: November 6th, 2011, 9:17am
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High tech and hidden agendas aplenty. I approve.
The thicken plots. But did the Engineer get the train moving?
E.D.
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Sandra Elstree.
Posted: November 6th, 2011, 1:13pm
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High tech and hidden agendas aplenty. I approve.
The thicken plots. But did the Engineer get the train moving?
E.D.
Michael did razamadaz with the whirligigs, but my post was way too long and needed cutting.
Sandra
A known mistake is better than an unknown truth.
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mcornetto
Posted: November 6th, 2011, 9:42pm
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Good stuff Darren. It seems like everyone's got a bit of blood on their hands. I'll update the info in a few hours because I'm at work right now - just letting you know. Dreamscale is up next - will 'A' critique someone to death?!?
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darrentomalin
Posted: November 6th, 2011, 9:46pm
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Hmmmm, who (if anybody) went out the window...?
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Sandra Elstree.
Posted: November 6th, 2011, 10:17pm
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Hmmmm, who (if anybody) went out the window...?
Darren, I really enjoyed your post and your comment is freaking me out because I actually thought, "I bet Z & I or someone made it look that way because otherwise, they would have been more subtle.
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Zanej
Posted: November 6th, 2011, 11:23pm
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Great post. I think someone is on to I's plan...
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darrentomalin
Posted: November 7th, 2011, 2:58am
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Or maybe they were disturbed... and there was a struggle...
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mcornetto
Posted: November 7th, 2011, 3:15am
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So, Darren, are you using your kill on I? You have to be specific to use your kill - subtle doesn't count and we have to see it. Since you implied it heavily I'm willing to let that go as a kill, if you want that to be a kill for I then let me know pretty quick. EDIT: Stuff is updated but may change some depending on Darren's answer to the above question.
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