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Murder on the Simply Express - Killer Discussion (currently 33400 views)
Mr.Ripley
Posted: November 12th, 2011, 1:47pm
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It was intro'd by Renec. It's a baretta 9mm.
I didn't want to complicate things so I made it short, simple and too the point. Z has the gun and is in control or is he?
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Zanej
Posted: November 12th, 2011, 4:59pm
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I'm just gonna shoot everyone so I can live
also I think at the end U's line why did you bring us here should be Z saying to U unless I mixed something up
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mcornetto
Posted: November 12th, 2011, 5:09pm
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Great job, Gabe - though short. And everyone who hasn't taken a kill, remember to take it this time. Those of you who already used a kill remember not to take one this time.
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Mr.Ripley
Posted: November 12th, 2011, 5:48pm
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Great entry Michael.
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Grandma Bear
Posted: November 12th, 2011, 7:05pm
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I'm reading it through later tonight. I have my cheat sheet right here.
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Dreamscale
Posted: November 12th, 2011, 7:36pm
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YES! The sex fiend, Sandra returns!!!
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Grandma Bear
Posted: November 12th, 2011, 7:57pm
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I have no interest in that. Sandra can have it.
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Dreamscale
Posted: November 12th, 2011, 8:47pm
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mcornetto
Posted: November 12th, 2011, 9:02pm
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The boy who could fly
Posted: November 13th, 2011, 2:24am
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Good work Gabe and Michael, it's getting pretty wild!! Who is gonna make past the mid west?
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Electric Dreamer
Posted: November 13th, 2011, 12:31pm
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LOL! This time in a male voice.
You're a meanie, Cornie.
Fun stuff, guys. I like the logic of the name changing.
Then to go from resurrection right into makin whopee!
That's so Match Game!
E.D.
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Sandra Elstree.
Posted: November 13th, 2011, 2:26pm
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I loved the move with Z pushing for the reveal of what was going on. We got that. And then, we learn U was apparently cheated left right and center. It definitely would make for a good point on a rewrite: Showing these people all being less than honorable in their dealings with him.
You know, I have to admit, going to names threw me for a loop. I was already getting a good feel for the letters.
It's interesting seeing M alive again. I'd like to see her save P before she's killed off again, but I don't think that's going to happen.
Very nicely done, gentlemen. I love the comedy.
Sandra
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ReneC
Posted: November 13th, 2011, 7:02pm
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I thought Darren S was horribly melodramatic until the reveal that M was faking it. Great execution on resurrecting a character, Michael.
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Dreamscale
Posted: November 13th, 2011, 9:19pm
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mcornetto
Posted: November 13th, 2011, 9:25pm
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A bit on the pron side of things but good post nonetheless.
African American hands? That's making me think. I'll have to stop that immediately.
And poor Sandra, gone again.
Anyways, Gabe is up next. Go for it Mr. Ripley.
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