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darrentomalin
Posted: November 17th, 2011, 3:51pm Report to Moderator
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Great stuff, Rebekah to the rescue, sort the posturing guys out!
(the bomb was remote not timed btw - the red trigger thing)
I remember having pity on "T" being killed on the toilet, but being bogwashed to death!?
This is going to be tricky - who killed C when all the survivors were apparently together?
One suspects SFX trickery, or smoke and mirrors in play here...
Now where did I put my deerstalker?


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Quoted from darrentomalin

(the bomb was remote not timed btw - the red trigger thing)

Oh sorry. I missed that part. I would have done things a little different if I had picked up on that, but my piece would still have ended the same.  


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Good stuff, nice to see some ellen ripley action going on! The cast is gettin' smaller by the mile! Who is this master killer????


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So I'm a squealer, Pia? Twice!

Fine work, I like the unified mission and brisk pace.
Hopefully, I lasy long enough to further incriminate my girly Melvin Udall self!

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Due to his sudden turn change "I" has been given an extra 24 hours to finish his entry.  That should work out rather well for "E" too.
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Sandra Elstree.
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I'm excited to watch "I" work his magic!  

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A known mistake is better than an unknown truth.
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Good entry. My true identity ousted... but what am I if not a former SEAL?
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Walrus?


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Dreamscale
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Maybe you're the killer?
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Mr. Blonde
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My scene's written. Anybody interested in proofreading?


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You can pass it over this way if you haven't heard from anyone else.
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No, I have not heard from anyone else. Thank you, Michael. =)


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mcornetto
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Excellent entry Sean...

And because you finished so quickly, Sandra is up next.  

Brett will go after Sandra.
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Sandra Elstree.
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Very nicely done, I. For Intriguing...   A brief case of cash huh? Wella wella. And the code for opening the brief case started with 9? And it's conveniently written down on the notepad? Three numbers that could easily be remembered? I think it might be rather trap like.

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Dreamscale
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And I'm now dead.

You rat bastard!  
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