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Just a heads up, Sandra. You explained your intentions in the E-mail, but you didn't actually send your scene. That is, unless you sent it separately or are waiting. But, whenever you send it, you're welcome. =)
The ever present, "forget to attach document". I'm on it for correction. Sandra!
I'd like to see the train in serious danger before we enter the next scene.
Sandra
I had the same thought with the bomb, up the stakes!
Mr. Blonde - I left it ambiguous but personally, figured that "I" being a capable hitman would have definitely gave a good fight, hence Rebekah hearing banging and smashing and mistaking it for some rough sex! "I" was scrapping, Jason Bourne style, I figured the killer would want to do away with his/her biggest threat, the one with more information than everyone else. Unfortunately, "I" lost and went out the window (pending any resurection - as you said, no one SAW him go out, maybe he'll rush in at the last minute and rescue everyone!)
The bomb was certainly an interesting spin. And, at the last minute, boom! Imagine if they hadn't made it, though? We're all dead. =)
Hell no. I could quotes movies all day to explain. I'm happy he bit it because he's a gun person. Usually those types are that way because they can't fight to (yes, this is a pun) save their lives.
But, I believe Ivan Drago said it best, "If he dies, he dies."
Wanna start a bet on who the Master Killer is...? =)
I don't mean to sow discontent, just voicing my opinion.
You can see what happens when someone or a number of people decide to take things away from the intended path. And it's definitely each person's right to go wherever they want to, but this is usually the result when this takes place.
Not unless she's E-mailed or PM'ed somebody or something. Technically, the story can still be rolled with, but the biggest issue I saw that adding in the next character and the new train car which we hadn't seen through the course of the story yet.
The technology-ness stuff can be worked with in some way, I think. Although it's not fair for me to say as I've already done both my sections, so who knows?
I don't mind the content. However, I mind that she broke the basic rules of the game. I would be more forgiving if this was the first time this has happened with Sandra - but it's not. She knows better.
Jeez, guys...here I am slacking on the boards, yet somehow I've been pretty busy on this train! :p
I am liking some of the twists that have come out, though I'm with you guys on Sandra's post - inventive, certainly, but a bit out there for the story IMHO.
Anyway, I'm starting to brew some ideas for my turn, depending on what happens between now and then
On a completely OT note, I'm hoping to finish the first draft of my feature this week!! Fuh-reaking excited!