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Mr. Blonde
Posted: November 20th, 2011, 8:59pm Report to Moderator
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What good are choices if they're all bad?

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Still OT: I hate you... Lol. Just kidding. I just wish I could finish a feature. =)


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Hehe, if it makes you feel any better, this project has been ongoing for nearly a year now. Nothing hate-worthy about that. I'll take your pity any day tho;)
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Mr. Blonde
Posted: November 20th, 2011, 9:16pm Report to Moderator
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I hate that even more. The script I'm closest to finishing is over two years old... =(


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Eh...I got nothin... :p

PM me if you wanna do a page race, tho - I could really use the motivation (I've been 'nearly finished' with this thing for weeks now and can't seem to get the last sequence done).
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Dreamscale
Posted: November 20th, 2011, 9:23pm Report to Moderator
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And now the thread itself has fallen as far off track as the actual script has.

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Haha, I'm only here to help!!
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Mr. Blonde
Posted: November 20th, 2011, 9:27pm Report to Moderator
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I mentioned OT in my last one. Don't hate me!























So, anyway, who's the Master Killer going to be?


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Sandra Elstree.
Posted: November 20th, 2011, 11:38pm Report to Moderator
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I don't mind the content.  However, I mind that she broke the basic rules of the game.  I would be more forgiving if this was the first time this has happened with Sandra - but it's not.  She knows better.


I worked extremely hard on this last post. If you knew how many hours I put in, well...

I think I deserve to know what rules I have broken and I had checked in with Sean first. He checked my post. And even after that, I further edited.

I feel very bad. Extremely weak. And no, I don't know better. I've not taken any classes. I read books and live life. I'm only a movie watcher at the movies on the big screen-- for special occasions.

I will not be partaking in anymore games on Simplyscripts because this proves to me: It's not a game. If you're not up to par, then you shouldn't participate.

With that, I express my sorrow. I really did try my best. If you want to do me any good, then please tell me what I really did wrong.

You have sincerely killed my urge to write further. I really feel hurt, spent and uninspired. Really. I guess I'm not cut out to be a writer.  

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A known mistake is better than an unknown truth.
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mcornetto
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1. No characters unless they are on the list.  
2. You should not be able to see the killer.


Sandra, honestly, we've been through this before with other games.   There's very few rules - I have every right to insist that the few there are get followed. I'm sorry if you feel hurt by that.
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Sandra Elstree.
Posted: November 20th, 2011, 11:56pm Report to Moderator
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[quote=mcornetto][/quote]

The killer was not seen. The kill was produced by the frequency. The suicide was only an action (causal from the frequency).

Sandra



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mcornetto
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Ok. Will accept the kill, if you get rid of the excess characters.  It's not fair to others if I allow you to add characters and they can't.  Fair?
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Sandra Elstree.
Posted: November 21st, 2011, 12:17am Report to Moderator
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Ok. Will accept the kill, if you get rid of the excess characters.  It's not fair to others if I allow you to add characters and they can't.  Fair?


I would have been happy to kill huge amounts. I wrote that for Sean and I know he was spent. I would have sent it on to every single player in the game to cut, but this is not how this game wanted to proceed.

I'm not protective of my post. Like WTF? It's not engraved on stone tablets. Why not just erase it. Say Sandra's feeble. Can't write worth a damn. And give the turn over to someone else. (Sorry, but that also implicates the partner writer. Ach but I'd so be happy to be "implicated" with him  )

I know that I had good intentions, did the best I possibly could.

There's a lot of tear down here and I sincerely feel it's not warranted.

Sandra



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mcornetto
Posted: November 21st, 2011, 12:25am Report to Moderator
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I'm not saying you can't write, Sandra - no one is.  I'm saying you have a hard time following rules.

You've sent me a PM that you would rather have the whole thing deleted rather than make the few changes I suggested - to get rid of the additional characters only.

Are you certain you want it deleted?


  
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Sandra Elstree.
Posted: November 21st, 2011, 12:29am Report to Moderator
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I'm not saying you can't write, Sandra - no one is.  I'm saying you have a hard time following rules.

You've sent me a PM that you would rather have the whole thing deleted rather than make the few changes I suggested - to get rid of the additional characters only.

Are you certain you want it deleted?


  


I am certainly more than certain, Michael. You know me.  DELETE.

Sandra




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mcornetto
Posted: November 21st, 2011, 12:33am Report to Moderator
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Deleted.  Someone got a reprieve.  

Brett is up.  He gets an additional kill.  
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