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Zanej
Posted: November 24th, 2011, 12:59am Report to Moderator
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Good entry, liked the decapitation
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Great work Electric Dreamer.

rdhay is up next and she has a kill to use.  Who's she going to use it on?

Then ReneC is up and he has a kill too.  Don't start writing until rdhay posts, ReneC.

  


I used my kill, do I get another?  


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mcornetto
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I used my kill, do I get another?  


No.
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It's coming, guys...it's not as easy now with only 4 people to implicate:p

Er, uh, 5. Sry, even the simplest math is a joke on early Saturday mornings

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Sandra Elstree.
Posted: November 25th, 2011, 5:40pm Report to Moderator
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Quoted from rdhay
It's coming, guys...it's not as easy now with only 4 people to implicate:p

Er, uh, 5. Sry, even the simplest math is a joke on early Saturday mornings


Good luck, Girlfriend. I still would have much preferred you work from what I had drawn out. Would have been fatabulous, Darling. But who knew that a train couldn't have a FEMALE ATTENDANT. Still think that was a wrong call. And to have a guy die all Star Trekish from an unseen frequency. Hey, too bad so sad.

Anyways, I've been fighting for your character since the beginning. Get those wagons in a circle.  

Sandra




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I tried my version of a female "hero" too, but that was shot down as well.    At least you know you got Sandra and me behind you. Keeping my fingers crossed!


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Thanks ladies Hopefully I make you proud.
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mcornetto
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Well done Rebekah!

Everything is updated.  

ReneC is up next.  
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Sandra Elstree.
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Rebah, baby. Don't you know how I can rib Michael now?!!!

See Michael, if you had a FEMALE ATTENDANT, she could have cleaned up that vomit for you.  

Sandra



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Hehe, ah I just thought he deserved a little dose of reality;)
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There was no FEMALE ATTENDANT on the train, Sandra.  If there was she would have been mentioned in the list of characters.  There was also not a snack kiosk or a voice on the other end of Rebekah's mobile.  

Simple as that.  
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Sandra Elstree.
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There was no FEMALE ATTENDANT on the train, Sandra.  If there was she would have been mentioned in the list of characters.  There was also not a snack kiosk or a voice on the other end of Rebekah's mobile.  

Simple as that.  


One thing's for sure, Michael. Just because you failed to notice her, that FEMALE ATTENDANT was there. And, she was critical to the script. In her position, she watched from the sidelines, so unobtrusive that no one noticed-- including you. "U"! So I can't fault you one bit!!!!!!  

G-d love you. I really never meant to be any kind of disruption. I really was doing my very best.

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You know, Sandra, one of these days I'm going to elect you as keeper of a Killer game and you can see for yourself why people need to follow the simple rules of the game.  Or you can let everyone run wild and see what happens then... or rather see what doesn't happen.
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Sandra Elstree.
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You know, Sandra, one of these days I'm going to elect you as keeper of a Killer game and you can see for yourself why people need to follow the simple rules of the game.  Or you can let everyone run wild and see what happens then... or rather see what doesn't happen.


No, I know (not really) but I do Michael. Everyone thinks it's easy-peasy until they're in the management position. I don't have the activated DNA working in me to fulfill your position and am happy to at least "try" and abide by the rules that you set. They are good and worthy I know. Still, you know me, I like to try and delve into the questions of what's happening.

Sincerely, I don't mean to cause any disturbance. I think it comes down to the peculiar way that I think of things.

Really really, I know that we can all learn so much by these exercises. Everyone can learn from my big "kabosh" (though unintended). If that helps, though it's humiliating, I have to say that it's a very good thing. And, it's desired by me.

G-d bless and you know I'm a true friend even if I'm off the "normal curve".

Sandra



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Good work Rebekah!

I guess Jordan will write the final piece?


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