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Murder on the Simply Express - Killer Discussion (currently 33407 views)
Sandra Elstree.
Posted: November 27th, 2011, 1:29pm
Of The Ancients
What if the Hokey Pokey, IS what it's all about?
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Ah Rene, you didn't get to finish what was started. Oh my, this should really be called the X Train. Which reminds me.... Jordon.
Wella Rene, after what went on in The Lair, this one's for you.
VIDEO Sandra
A known mistake is better than an unknown truth.
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TheUsualSuspect
Posted: November 27th, 2011, 6:58pm
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Had no real time to write one up, so it's really short and to the point. Like I pointed out earlier, the fun in this for me was gone very fast and this was my first time too. I'm not pissed or anything cause I know someone had to go first. Anyways, my entry is up.
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mcornetto
Posted: November 27th, 2011, 7:18pm
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Usual The stuff you did was good but you needed to kill a player character. Not the CHEF who is a non-player character. Do you want to go back and correct it? or I can let it stand and give the kill to the next player? Let me know.
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Mr. Blonde
Posted: November 27th, 2011, 7:29pm
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If he doesn't want it, I'll take an extra kill... =) *stands in the back, hoping no one notices him*
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TheUsualSuspect
Posted: November 28th, 2011, 1:15am
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mcornetto
Posted: November 28th, 2011, 5:31am
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Thanks for fixing that up Usual. Poor Rebekah. Everything is update, Jordan is up next with the last kill.
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The boy who could fly
Posted: November 28th, 2011, 5:57am
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FINALLY!!!! Will have to do it tomorrow after work, gotta think who is gonna die a most painfull death
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Electric Dreamer
Posted: November 28th, 2011, 9:28am
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And then there were three little Indians left.
Now, it's an all boys club.
Michael and myself seemed pretty innocent of the damsel's demise.
Unless....we used a remote gun...OR!....hypnotized Rene! Yeah! That's it!
I was wondering, do the turns continue after the final kill?
Here's a thought. How about we have a SECOND VOTE for the best kill?
Nominate your favorite death scene. Could be fun!
E.D.
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Sandra Elstree.
Posted: November 28th, 2011, 9:28am
Of The Ancients
What if the Hokey Pokey, IS what it's all about?
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Nice effort with the suspense there, Usual. BTW, I was imagining a CHEF in this also, just as I was a FEMALE ATTENDANT.
Someone had to come through that vent, I guess he was working with a big chef's cleaver.
Sandra
A known mistake is better than an unknown truth.
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DarrenJamesSeeley
Posted: November 28th, 2011, 10:20am
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Quoted from Sandra Elstree
I was imagining a CHEF in this also, just as I was a FEMALE ATTENDANT
The Chef and the Female attendant were already dead, chopped up into M&M size peanuts and packed away in suitcases in Warm Storage. Also, it wasn't *just* Swordfish that was being served earlier in the game. It tasted like seafood because it was mixed in with the seafood.. That was what I always thought Sandra
The boy who could fly
Posted: November 28th, 2011, 10:37am
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Ok, finished, sent it off for a read, will post it late tonight after i get home from work. It's pretty different, but not weird, hopefully it won't piss anybody off.
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rdhay
Posted: November 28th, 2011, 5:31pm
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Aw dang
Good entry tho
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The boy who could fly
Posted: November 29th, 2011, 4:47am
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The final two are revealed! Tried something a bit different, hope it's ok. Now who is the MASTER killer?
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mcornetto
Posted: November 29th, 2011, 5:08am
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Good one Jordan, even though it meant my characters head was split in two. And know we know who the final two are. While we are waiting for the last two to take their turn and develop story, you can vote for the Master Killer. To do so - PM me with either one of these two subjects...Electric Dreamer is the Master Killer or ReneC is the Master Killer Whomever you elect will write the last post of the game and conclude the script. I will announce the results of the vote after Zanej posts. DarrenJamesSeeley is up next.
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Zanej
Posted: November 29th, 2011, 6:23am
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Good one U planned it from the begging SMH
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