Thanks for fixing that up Usual.  Poor Rebekah.  


Everything is update, Jordan is up next with the last kill.  

FINALLY!!!! Will have to do it tomorrow after work, gotta think who is gonna die a most painfull death

And then there were three little Indians left.
Now, it's an all boys club.
Michael and myself seemed pretty innocent of the damsel's demise.
Unless....we used a remote gun...OR!....hypnotized Rene! Yeah! That's it!

I was wondering, do the turns continue after the final kill?

Here's a thought. How about we have a SECOND VOTE for the best kill?
Nominate your favorite death scene. Could be fun!

E.D.

Nice effort with the suspense there, Usual. BTW, I was imagining a CHEF in this also, just as I was a FEMALE ATTENDANT.  

Someone had to come through that vent, I guess he was working with a big chef's cleaver.

Sandra

Quoted from Sandra Elstree I was imagining a CHEF in this also, just as I was a FEMALE ATTENDANT

The Chef and the Female attendant were already dead, chopped up into M&M size peanuts and packed away in suitcases in Warm Storage. Also, it wasn't *just* Swordfish that was being served earlier in the game. It tasted like seafood because it was mixed in with the seafood.. That was what I always thought Sandra

Ok, finished, sent it off for a read, will post it late tonight after i get home from work. It's pretty different, but not weird, hopefully it won't p*ss anybody off.

Aw dang

Good entry tho

The final two are revealed! Tried something a bit different, hope it's ok. Now who is the MASTER killer?

Good one Jordan, even though it meant my characters head was split in two.   And know we know who the final two are.  

While we are waiting for the last two to take their turn and develop story, you can vote for the Master Killer.  

To do so - PM me with either one of these two subjects...

Electric Dreamer is the Master Killer

or

ReneC is the Master Killer

Whomever you elect will write the last post of the game and conclude the script.

I will announce the results of the vote after Zanej posts.  

DarrenJamesSeeley is up next.

Good one U planned it from the begging SMH

Before reading the latest entry, I noticed the little "E" icon was greyed out.
Then I read the post and saw that Michael got the axe!
I thought I was dead while reading Jordan's script! LOL, nice one Cornie.
And Jordon's neat reversal had me convinced there for a moment, to boot!

Should you vote for me as Master Killer, I pledge the following:
I'll include a flashback of each and everyone and how they pissed me off.

For instance...
That make up dude that touched my chair on set once? Yeah, he had to die.
Did you see his enormous dirty hands? He's like a Johnny Bench hobo.

Anyone interested in having a vote for their favorite death too?

Cheers,
E.D.

Good times, Jordan. I almost wish the post-flashback stuff had gone on a little longer because just a sequence in a dark hallway is always cool. Otherwise, it was good stuff.

Quoted from mcornetto Good one Jordan, even though it meant my characters head was split in two.   And know we know who the final two are.   While we are waiting for the last two to take their turn and develop story, you can vote for the Master Killer.   To do so - PM me with either one of these two subjects... Electric Dreamer is the Master Killer or ReneC is the Master Killer Whomever you elect will write the last post of the game and conclude the script. I will announce the results of the vote after Zanej posts.   DarrenJamesSeeley is up next.

It'll probably be done sometime today or tommorow.
I'm in a debate whether I should go into Hitchcock territtory or make Tom Six cry like a b****.

And then there were two.  

Since E.D. has started campaigning, I'll just say if I'm the master killer I pledge to make as much money off of it as I can. A lucrative fourteen-part mini-series deal on HBO. T-shirts that read "I survived the Simply Express". Mouse pads with provocative silhouettes of the ladies. Mugs that read "Simply Express: fastest train to a self-defense plea".

Jordon, I really did appreciate your post. The visuals were wonderful and because I sometimes skim slugs, I missed the part with the real "I" you had as a flashback. I at first thought it was a flash forward. In any case, nicely done.

As far as the master killer goes, it's weird, but I had a dream last night. I don't remember a lot, (maybe I will later) but here it was and it was like a real movie.

There was a shot of Electric Dreamer from the back on the right hand side. He was sitting down, confessing to someone. He was wearing a grey shirt with a bit of a tiny speckled quality to it (I'm not sure of the fabric) but it was really rich looking. His hair was combed neatly, he was in a somber mood, regretting, but in no way tearful.

Based on this dream, I vote E.D. as the Master Killer.

Sandra