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Posted: July 31st, 2006, 9:57pm Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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Tommy Two-Shakes by James C. Schlicker - Drama - A young man fresh from war and followed by ghosts from the battlefield defends his only friend against a hoodlum that has terrorized them both. 103 pages - pdf, format


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I just now realized you are the same author who wrote Comanche Carl. Comanche Carl was good, but this new script of yours Tommy Two-shakes is even better.

I really have nothing to say bad about your script. I can’t think of one thing to say negative about it. Your war scenes were great. They seemed so frantic. And this script actually has a theme or a message that you can clearly see.

The jumps in time and flashbacks all found a way to tie themselves together. I’ve read screenplays where I quickly get lost in all the non-linear story telling and a lot of flashbacks. This one however was so clear and easy to follow. I didn’t put this script down once.

You are seriously talented and if you haven’t gotten anything produced yet, I will be shocked.

Awesome job, and Good Luck.


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Thank You Sir, May I Have Another?

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Nice screenplay. Enjoyed it. Istn;t toimmy two shakes a WoW character? all and all. 7 out of ten. Great Work!


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Thanks for the thumbs up, God of Thunder.  Glad you enjoyed the read.

James C.


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