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Posted: June 11th, 2018, 8:50pm Report to Moderator
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Nirvana Road by Michael Hilow - Drama - A young woman on a new-age quest ends up a fugitive after she joins a commune and volunteers for their security team. 104 pages

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contests: Finalist, 2011 Beverly Hills Film Festival, Honorable Mention, 2011 Colorado Film Festival, Finalist, 2012 Wildrose Independent Film Festival - pdf format

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Don  -  November 8th, 2018, 6:02pm
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Hi Michael, I really like the title and slug line. Nice details in the action lines - such as squirrel in the garden trying to get to the bird feeder...
I've read the first ten pages or so and got confused who is who, and the nice details disappeared and it got heavy on dialogues.  But you live in Virginia and I live in UK so the terminology is different so I should give it another go at a later date!


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