Finding My Way Home To You by Ashley Byron  - Drama - After losing his memory , A disfigured fighter pilot returns to his hometown and reunites with his wife and son who don't recognize him. 87 pages - pdf format

Writer interested in feedback on this work

Ashley:

You're kind of missing the basics. These are problems on the first 1/4 page.

Quoted Text INT WEST HOUSE - DAY Ty walks downstairs

Should be:

INT. WEST HOUSE - DAY

Need to CAP TY (as is the case with all characters) when first intro'd.

Give us some description of the setting - we don't know if we're in a mansion or a slum house.

Describe your characters. - Physical traits at least.

Quoted Text TY ( Hey mom dad hasn't responded yet

Missing a comma after Hey and a period after yet. You have grammar errors throughout.
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Quoted Text AVERY (30) He will buddy I am sure he will

need a comma after will. A period after buddy. A period after the last will.

Never have a character speak before they are introduced.

Quoted Text TY When is he coming home

? needed after home.

Do some Google research on script format - get some grammar tools. You need to develop the basic building blocks.