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JK2Write
Posted: October 10th, 2017, 10:38am Report to Moderator
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Why you so bitter mate? Lighten up
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I read the first 10. But if you're going to bring characters like this back - and convince David Jason etc. to get on board - the writing has to be impeccable and downright hilarious. This isn't that yet.

Have you considered modernising the format completely? If Del was dead and Damian was struggling to support a family, you could explore a new world with more modern themes.  Otherwise you might be flogging dead fools and horses.

As always - just my opinion.


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Posted: October 10th, 2017, 11:46am Report to Moderator
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Quoted from JK2Write
Why you so bitter mate? Lighten up


I'm not bitter at all. I'd have to care to be bitter. I just can't see this working. Nobody cares about Only Fools and Horses anymore, not even the old fans. Some things are just best left in our memories.

I'd follow Alex's advice and modernise completely, using Damien and a hapless colleague. Essentially the same thing, but with different characters. Del, Raquel, and Rodney could play cameos or Del could even play the role of Grandad - albeit being the Dad.
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