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Dreamscale
Posted: February 22nd, 2010, 6:35pm
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IMO, "straight forward" means simple, easy to figure out and understand, no ambiguity, etc.
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khamanna
Posted: February 22nd, 2010, 6:38pm
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Yeah, exactly. It's very straight forward. For me. Do you mean you do not agree with it, or it's the word choice you don't like?
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Dreamscale
Posted: February 22nd, 2010, 7:45pm
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It's far from straight forward, as is obvious by all the differing view points, and perceptions of what exactly is going on and why. What is straight forward about it?
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khamanna
Posted: February 22nd, 2010, 7:57pm
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Same way I say "what's not straightforward about it". I haven't read the reviews on it... up until now. Edgar wants to prove David wrong and plays him - it's this simple for me. Plays him well.
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khamanna
Posted: February 22nd, 2010, 7:59pm
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This one is my favorite, by the way.
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Dreamscale
Posted: February 22nd, 2010, 8:05pm
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OK, but we already know from the author's mouth that Edgar isn't even a real person. He's a figment of David's imagination. Most of this script takes place in David's imagination. So what you thought was straight forward, isn't even what the story is about. Understand?
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khamanna
Posted: February 22nd, 2010, 8:18pm
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I know that Edgar isn't a real person. Not "from the authors mouth" but from the story. And if it's only David's imagination - all the better. The imagination played him or "something, called Edgar" played him - I don't even wish to know. It's something that doesn't agree with "the bad gene" thing. Maybe a trace of doubt that never left David's mind played trick on him...I don't even question what it is. By STRAIGHTFORWARD here - I mean it does not deviate from the story. Straightforward is not always "not ambiguous" - I know I agreed with you, but accidentally really. Straightforward here (for me) is "single thought driven". Understand?
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Dreamscale
Posted: February 22nd, 2010, 8:27pm
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No, I don't understand, but at this point, I don't think it matters much. Is Shutter island a "straight forward" flick as well?
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khamanna
Posted: February 22nd, 2010, 8:34pm
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Know what - I started looking for Shutter Island short here on Feb OWC and then realized... I don't know anything about Shutter Island but sense the sarcasm. What can I say - congrats, you've succeded at being sarcastic.
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Dreamscale
Posted: February 22nd, 2010, 8:44pm
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Dude, I'm just trying to make a simple point...and that point is that this script is so far from being straight forward, that I'm amazed this back and forth is still going on. I don't mean to offend you or put you down, or even say that what you're saying isn't correct. It is what it is, and straight forward, it isn't.
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khamanna
Posted: February 22nd, 2010, 10:42pm
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Dudette! And, Tim, I apologize for highjacking your thread. I'll stop posting here.
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Dreamscale
Posted: February 22nd, 2010, 10:51pm
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My bad...I apologize. Someone else informed me awhile ago. I didn't know and I didn't mean anything bad.
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mcornetto
Posted: February 22nd, 2010, 11:01pm
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Jeff's inability to distinguish Dude's from Dudette's got him into a real pickle during his last visit to Thailand.
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Grandma Bear
Posted: February 22nd, 2010, 11:04pm
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Quoted from mcornetto
Jeff's inability to distinguish Dude's from Dudette's got him into a real pickle during his last visit to Thailand.
There's some embarrassing video of that online somewhere too.
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Dreamscale
Posted: February 22nd, 2010, 11:25pm
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HaHa...very, very funny guys...and gals. I sure hope that video doesn't surface. I thought all 6 of them were girls...I really did. Sure, I was high as a kite on that Tai Stick we smoked, but they all really looked like chicks! Well, until something unwanted "popped up". I freaked and ran out of that shack butt-ass naked. Luckily for me, there was another brothel a few feet away, that I took shelter in. I'm not really sure how I ended up married to those twin 22 year olds. We annulled it 2 weeks later, but, damn, they were fun while I (I mean, it) lasted. Those bastards revoked my visa and I haven;'t been back since.
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