SimplyScripts Discussion Board
Blog Home - Produced Movie Script Library - TV Scripts - Unproduced Scripts - Contact - Site Map
ScriptSearch
Welcome, Guest.
It is April 25th, 2024, 5:15pm
Please login or register.
Was Portal Recent Posts Home Help Calendar Search Register Login
Please do read the guidelines that govern behavior on the discussion board. It will make for a much more pleasant experience for everyone. A word about SimplyScripts and Censorship


Produced Script Database (Updated!)

Short Script of the Day | Featured Script of the Month | Featured Short Scripts Available for Production
Submit Your Script

How do I get my film's link and banner here?
All screenplays on the simplyscripts.com and simplyscripts.net domain are copyrighted to their respective authors. All rights reserved. This screenplaymay not be used or reproduced for any purpose including educational purposes without the expressed written permission of the author.
Forum Login
Username: Create a new Account
Password:     Forgot Password

SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board    One Week Challenge    February, 2010 One Week Challenge  ›  OWC - The Killing Gene *
Users Browsing Forum
No Members and 2 Guests

 Pages: « 1, 2, 3, 4, 5 » : All
Recommend Print
  Author    OWC - The Killing Gene *  (currently 8878 views)
Dreamscale
Posted: February 22nd, 2010, 6:35pm Report to Moderator
Guest User



IMO, "straight forward" means simple, easy to figure out and understand, no ambiguity, etc.
Logged
e-mail Reply: 45 - 62
khamanna
Posted: February 22nd, 2010, 6:38pm Report to Moderator
January Project Group



Posts
4195
Posts Per Day
0.79
Yeah, exactly. It's very straight forward. For me.

Do you mean you do not agree with it, or it's the word choice you don't like?
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 46 - 62
Dreamscale
Posted: February 22nd, 2010, 7:45pm Report to Moderator
Guest User



It's far from straight forward, as is obvious by all the differing view points, and perceptions of what exactly is going on and why.

What is straight forward about it?
Logged
e-mail Reply: 47 - 62
khamanna
Posted: February 22nd, 2010, 7:57pm Report to Moderator
January Project Group



Posts
4195
Posts Per Day
0.79
Same way I say "what's not straightforward about it".

I haven't read the reviews on it... up until now.

Edgar wants to prove David wrong and plays him - it's this simple for me. Plays him well.
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 48 - 62
khamanna
Posted: February 22nd, 2010, 7:59pm Report to Moderator
January Project Group



Posts
4195
Posts Per Day
0.79
This one is my favorite, by the way.
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 49 - 62
Dreamscale
Posted: February 22nd, 2010, 8:05pm Report to Moderator
Guest User



OK, but we already know from the author's mouth that Edgar isn't even a real person.  He's a figment of David's imagination.  Most of this script takes place in David's imagination.

So what you thought was straight forward, isn't even what the story is about.

Understand?
Logged
e-mail Reply: 50 - 62
khamanna
Posted: February 22nd, 2010, 8:18pm Report to Moderator
January Project Group



Posts
4195
Posts Per Day
0.79
I know that Edgar isn't a real person. Not "from the authors mouth" but from the story. And if it's only David's imagination - all the better. The imagination played him or "something, called Edgar" played him - I don't even wish to know. It's something that doesn't agree with "the bad gene" thing. Maybe a trace of doubt that never left David's mind played trick on him...I don't even question what it is.

By STRAIGHTFORWARD here - I mean it does not deviate from the story.

Straightforward is not always "not ambiguous" - I know I agreed with you, but accidentally really. Straightforward here (for me) is "single thought driven".

Understand?
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 51 - 62
Dreamscale
Posted: February 22nd, 2010, 8:27pm Report to Moderator
Guest User



No, I don't understand, but at this point, I don't think it matters much.

Is Shutter island a "straight forward" flick as well?
Logged
e-mail Reply: 52 - 62
khamanna
Posted: February 22nd, 2010, 8:34pm Report to Moderator
January Project Group



Posts
4195
Posts Per Day
0.79
Know what - I started looking for Shutter Island short here on Feb OWC and then realized...

I don't know anything about Shutter Island but sense the sarcasm. What can I say - congrats, you've succeded at being sarcastic.
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 53 - 62
Dreamscale
Posted: February 22nd, 2010, 8:44pm Report to Moderator
Guest User



Dude, I'm just trying to make a simple point...and that point is that this script is so far from being straight forward, that I'm amazed this back and forth is still going on.

I don't mean to offend you or put you down, or even say that what you're saying isn't correct.  It is what it is, and straight forward, it isn't.
Logged
e-mail Reply: 54 - 62
khamanna
Posted: February 22nd, 2010, 10:42pm Report to Moderator
January Project Group



Posts
4195
Posts Per Day
0.79
Dudette!

And, Tim, I apologize for highjacking your thread. I'll stop posting here.
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 55 - 62
Dreamscale
Posted: February 22nd, 2010, 10:51pm Report to Moderator
Guest User



My bad...I apologize.  Someone else informed me awhile ago.  I didn't know and I didn't mean anything bad.
Logged
e-mail Reply: 56 - 62
mcornetto
Posted: February 22nd, 2010, 11:01pm Report to Moderator
Guest User




Quoted from khamanna
Dudette!


Jeff's inability to distinguish Dude's from Dudette's got him into a real pickle during his last visit to Thailand.

Logged
e-mail Reply: 57 - 62
Grandma Bear
Posted: February 22nd, 2010, 11:04pm Report to Moderator
Administrator



Location
The Swamp...
Posts
7962
Posts Per Day
1.35

Quoted from mcornetto


Jeff's inability to distinguish Dude's from Dudette's got him into a real pickle during his last visit to Thailand.


There's some embarrassing video of that online somewhere too.


Logged
Private Message Reply: 58 - 62
Dreamscale
Posted: February 22nd, 2010, 11:25pm Report to Moderator
Guest User



HaHa...very, very funny guys...and gals.

I sure hope that video doesn't surface.  I thought all 6 of them were girls...I really did.  Sure, I was high as a kite on that Tai Stick we smoked, but they all really looked like chicks!  Well, until something unwanted "popped up".  I freaked and ran out of that shack butt-ass naked.  Luckily for me, there was another brothel a few feet away, that I took shelter in.

I'm not really sure how I ended up married to those twin 22 year olds.  We annulled it 2 weeks later, but, damn, they were fun while I (I mean, it) lasted.  Those bastards revoked my visa and I haven;'t been back since.
Logged
e-mail Reply: 59 - 62
 Pages: « 1, 2, 3, 4, 5 » : All
Recommend Print

Locked Board Board Index    February, 2010 One Week Challenge  [ previous | next ] Switch to:
Was Portal Recent Posts Home Help Calendar Search Register Login

Forum Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post polls
You may not post attachments
HTML is on
Blah Code is on
Smilies are on


Powered by E-Blah Platinum 9.71B © 2001-2006