Well, I plan on grinding this the next couple days in all my free time... but I'm prematurely apologizing in advance b/c I think I'm gonna stretch the genre restriction...  we'll see how this goes.

I legit haven't even started..........................I'm a bad, bad girl.

Quoted from Female Gaze I legit haven't even started..........................I'm a bad, bad girl.

Good girls are boring!

Quoted from Grandma Bear Good girls are boring!

So true!  

In my defense, I'm making a harry potter costume.....they're genie pants involved.

I'll start soon.

GREAT I'm not alone in the 'haven't even started department" makes me feel a little better...now .... to do it tonight or outline tonight and write tomorrow night? I wish I wish I wish I didn't have to work full time... days are my best times for writing because it's the only time I have alone time in the house.

Quoted from Pale Yellow GREAT I'm not alone in the 'haven't even started department" makes me feel a little better...now .... to do it tonight or outline tonight and write tomorrow night? I wish I wish I wish I didn't have to work full time... days are my best times for writing because it's the only time I have alone time in the house.

Yes. I feel you on that one.

Quiet is a distant memory.

I hope you guys like this better than my !art few entries.  This is my favorite genre by far.  Not since I joined have I had a chance to do horror.

Since it isn't anonymous, does that mean that we can discuss it at anytime?

One thing I will add is that this is adapted from a feature length film that I had.  So to cut it down to approximately 15 pages meant that I had to make major sacrifices.  Then, I had to cut it again because it came in at just under 18 pages.

I wasn't sure how to do a few things, so I know that my technique might be off.  One thing to really suffer was the paranoia.  I just hope that I get the point across.

I think this could be a very effective movie idea in the right hands.  If anyone loves it enough that you want to help me write it and you'd get a great deal if it sells, let me know.  I have the ideas in my head, but, not the health.

Thanks
Dan

Quoted from DanC Since it isn't anonymous, does that mean that we can discuss it at anytime?

Yes! Discussion is a part of this challenge.

~Zack~

Dan,

Might you have been able to take your original script and write up a little 15 page prologue? That would be pretty cool to do as a chance to expand upon your original ideas. I don't know how well a full length feature would fare if cut to a 15 page story. Could be rough.

Quoted from CameronD Dan, Might you have been able to take your original script and write up a little 15 page prologue? That would be pretty cool to do as a chance to expand upon your original ideas. I don't know how well a full length feature would fare if cut to a 15 page story. Could be rough.

I was thinking the same thing, but I'm giving Dan the benefit of the doubt.

~Zack~

Is this supposed to be a stand alone short when done? Or a short that could interest feature potential? I wrote three pages last night...will finish tonight. Before midnight I hope!

Quoted from Pale Yellow Is this supposed to be a stand alone short when done? Or a short that could interest feature potential?

That's completely up to you. Personally, I envision almost all of my shorts as potential feature material.

~Zack~

Submitted.

I have three pages done. Ugh. Not sure I'm going to make it yall.

Quoted from Pale Yellow I have three pages done. Ugh. Not sure I'm going to make it yall.

You can do it!

~Zack~