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Disco Cactus
Posted: February 16th, 2017, 8:09pm Report to Moderator
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Pitch your story with one sentence. For many readers, this is your first chance to hook them. What's your logline?

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The great force that is Ian Pitt teams with Dr. Smith to hunt down the remaining cannibals outside Baltimore, and put an end to the 1,000's of deaths caused by the hermit cannibal, Elijah.


To ski or not to ski...that's not even a question.
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The great force that is Ian Pitt teams with Dr. Smith to hunt down the remaining cannibals outside Baltimore, and put an end to the 1,000's of deaths caused by the hermit cannibal, Elijah.


Pure gold.  

~Zack~


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Pure gold.  

~Zack~


I may add something about Helen.



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Kosher - Late night munchies for a young couple at a deli turns deadly when the kitchen runs outs of pastrami.



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Kosher - Late night munchies for a young couple at a deli turns deadly when the kitchen runs outs of pastrami.


You've got my attention.

~Zack~


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A Cut Above the Rest - A food critic uncovers the dark truth about a burger joint that has never gotten one bad review... or else.

Sound tasty?


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As a child, Fred accidentally imprisoned a creature, drawing its enmity.  Now, it's free and wants revenge by destroying every aspect of Fred's life.

Is it okay to put that in 2 sentences, or should I go for a seemingly near run-on sentence?

lmk

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2 sentences is fine.


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Going to try to write something this weekend, but it depends if a baby decides to come or not!

I suck at loglines, so I don't have that yet, but I have two stories in mind. One monster and one cannibal. Roach Motel and Eat Me.  


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Roach Motel and Eat Me.  


Both sound very promising. Lol

And good luck with the new baby!


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The Feasting House - A young man inherits his grandfather's farmhouse, but the kindly townsfolk aren't quite what they seem.


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In the Genes - Celebrity organ cloning is all the rage with the Hollywood elite but when the organs start to go missing it's down to the lab's under fire boss to root out the culprit.

Finally an idea!  


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Quoted from AnthonyCawood
In the Genes - Celebrity organ cloning is all the rage with the Hollywood elite but when the organs start to go missing it's down to the lab's under fire boss to root out the culprit.

Finally an idea!  




That sounds awesome!!!!!
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This logline is not good.

Demon in the Sack - A frazzled man recounts the events of a terrifying date to his immature co-workers.

(scarrrrry!!!!)


I'd list my "work" here, but I don't know how to hyperlink.

"Career" Highlights
-I have a single credit on my IMDB page.
-One time a fairly prominent producer e-mailed me back.
-I have made just under $1000 with my writing!
-I've won 2 mugs.

@vc_wg - because I crave attention
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