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DanC
Posted: February 28th, 2017, 2:02am Report to Moderator
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Just submitted my rewrite. This is my third draft.

I make it clearer that Victor is the focal point, while Chuck assumes a Hicks/Hudson/Bishop "breakout hero" role. (And speaking of Hudson, RIP Bill Paxton.) I added three more employees to the climax, and more cannibalism (both intentional and unwitting).

Once again, happy haunting and good luck to everybody.


Chris, I wish you and everyone else the best as well.  

Is it bad if I want to eat the competition for this event, especially given the parameters of the exercise?

Lastly, thanks to Zach for doing this for us.  I hope you do at again.  If I may make a few suggestions
1 don't leave crucial things to fate.  if you want to draw from a hat,fine, but if the second pick is terrible due to the first one, just take another draw, or ask us if we'd like another draw.

If you plan to run something over 1week or that has multiple submissions, don't start the clock on weeks two and on until at least 2 days have passed by to allow time not only for Don to get the scripts up, but also to give us a chance to read the other stories as well as feedback for our stuff.

3  In cases like this where our names are on our stuff and we can have 1 submission any no rewrites until after others comment on them, allow those scripts to be posted early so that those who finished early can read them slower and give more thoughtful insightful responses.  I know that I felt a ton of pressure to read them ASAP so the writers can begin thinking about their rewrite.  This time you had a few entries, next time there could be 2dozen.

Dan


Please read my scripts:
http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-series/m-1427564706/

I'm interested in reading animation, horror, sci fy, suspense, fantasy, and anything that is good.  I enjoy writing the same.  Looking to team with anyone!

Thanks
Dan
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Steven
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Just to give you a few examples, lots of people write fan fiction for stuff like Doctor Who, Star Trek, Star Wars and the most famous (IMO) of this sort of tribute that have led to jobs, tons of stories of HP Lovecraft's cthulhu mythos.  Plenty of jobs have come from his fantasy \horror ideas.


It's just finding a venue where these types of work can be seen.

/r/producemyscripts is a subreddit that I've had some success on just recently.
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Berserkers rev.01 just submitted. I really tried to clean up page one and the ending. Thanks, in advance, for the read.
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Let's get these things up and ready to go!
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DanC
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Anyone know while the new scripts will be available to read?
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Please read my scripts:
http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-series/m-1427564706/

I'm interested in reading animation, horror, sci fy, suspense, fantasy, and anything that is good.  I enjoy writing the same.  Looking to team with anyone!

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I PM'd Zach so we will see.
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Zack
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I'm sure Don will let us know as soon as he has them posted.

~Zack~
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Don
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I'm sure Don will let us know as soon as he has them posted.

~Zack~


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Don
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The Second Draft SSC2WC Scripts have been posted.  They are in the same threads as the first draft.

Immortal Enmity by Dan Campisi - Short, Monster Horror - A monster seeks revenge against the man who accidentally imprisoned it years ago when he was a child. - pdf, format

American Cannibal by Steven Wood - Short, Cannibal Horror - After not taken seriously when confessing to a string of horrendous murders, this business man tries his hand at cooking. 11 pages - pdf, format

A Cut Above the Rest by Chris Bodily - Short, Cannibal Horror, Pod, Clone, Science Fiction - A food critic uncovers the dark truth about a burger joint that has never gotten one bad review... or else. 12 pages - pdf, format

Kosher by Cameron Dueker - Short, Cannibal Horror - Kosher - A late night pit stop for a young couple turns deadly at a local deli when the kitchen runs outs of pastrami.  16 pages - pdf, format

Demon in the Sack by Vin Conzo - Short, Monster, Cannibal Horror, Comedy - A frazzled man recounts the events of a terrifying date to his immature co-workers. 14 pages - pdf, format

Berserkers by John Staats - Short, Cannibal Horror  - Too much gluten can be hazardous to your health. - pdf, format

Cry No More by Pedro Schreier writing as ThE StOryTelleR - Short, Monster, Cannibal Horror - Something is on the move. It leaves a bloody massacre in every place it went through. The only clue a research team found -  is a mysterious boy. What they don't know - they're already lost. - pdf, format

Red Rover by Dena McKinnon - Short, Monster Horror - A single mother battling with an autistic child moves to a new town for a fresh start but finds herself in a town with a sinister secret of its own.  14 pages - pdf, format


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Thank you for doing this. Much appreciated.


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Thanks for getting these up Don. You're the man.

~Zack~
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Posted: March 3rd, 2017, 9:06pm Report to Moderator
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Thanks for getting these up Don. You're the man.

~Zack~


Thanks. Sorry for the delay.  Server has been funky lately.  

- Don


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Quoted from Don


Thanks. Sorry for the delay.  Server has been funky lately.  


Merlot is for human consumption, not machines...


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Saying this while imbibing. You have the power to delete...  


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Conz
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I'll try to look them all over again today.


I'd list my "work" here, but I don't know how to hyperlink.  

"Career" Highlights
-2, count em, 2 credits on my IMDB page.  
-One time a fairly prominent producer e-mailed me back.  
-I have made more than $1000 with my writing!
-I've won 2 mugs... and a thong.  (polaroids of me in thong available for $10 through PM)

@vc_wg - because I crave attention
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