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FrankM
Posted: April 15th, 2018, 9:51pm Report to Moderator
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Hi everyone,

I should soon be getting more free time to do more reviews, and thought this would be a good time to explicitly ask for a review exchange as well.

I fleshed out my first-round submission to the Writer's Tournament:

Timmy
"A trilogy of short stories about humans adjusting to the emergence of general-purpose A.I."


Each story can be mentioned on its own as well...

Timmy: Customer Service
A troublemaker pushes the limits of cheerful customer service.

Timmy: Uprising
The safety systems governing robots have become fool-proof. Someone invented better fools.

Timmy: Witness
An android witnesses one robot commit a crime upon another. This may change the fate of artificial intelligence forever.

Each installment is 6 pages, though all three are rolled into a single 18-page screenplay.

I'm always grateful for advice on story, writing, format, etc. but I'd also love to get someone's input on how to make this easier to produce.

Let me know if you have a sci-fi, fantasy, or family short that you'd like me to review in return.


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Sci-Fi short trilogy: Timmy

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I think I'll get bailed out of the writer's comp by the end of the week. I'll take a look after that. If I forget, feel free to give me a nudge via PM.


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Is it going to be posted here? If not my email is khamanna at hotmail - feel free to send it to me whenever.
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Quoted from khamanna
Is it going to be posted here? If not my email is khamanna at hotmail - feel free to send it to me whenever.


It's in his signature block.


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Ok, thanks Warren, I see it now.
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FrankM
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Sorry, the link was inline with the description. I forgot that links aren't particularly obvious in this forum. I edited the original post to make it more clear.

(The link in my signature block goes to the same place, but that might change at some point in the future.)

And thanks for your interest, both of you.


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