Quoted from Reef Dreamer Sorry not been around much, but then again I didn't enter. If anybody wants a read give me a PM Hope it's been a good one

Just to repeat, if lost in the other debate

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I just wanna know who wrote A Deathly Shade of Blue.

Quoted from Dreamscale First of all, there were no robots in that script. Secondly, even if you remove the VR concept revealed at the very end, it was a simple kidnapping that caused the Neo Nazi to be in a place he was not familiar with.

This makes me believe the Nazi boy was an AI:
ELISE "I'm just wondering if the AI of the Nazi... I mean he's pretty limited almost unreal?"
I'm probably wrong then but that's how I read the reveal.

Quoted from MarkItZero I just wanna know who wrote A Deathly Shade of Blue.

Must be Sandra.

Quoted from khamanna This makes me believe the Nazi boy was an AI: ELISE "I'm just wondering if the AI of the Nazi... I mean he's pretty limited almost unreal?" I'm probably wrong then but that's how I read the reveal.

The entire thing was a Virtual Reality game.  The Nazi kid was a creation of the game and yes, had AI, but nothing in this was "real" at all.

Quoted from khamanna Must be Sandra.

NO WAY!  Sandra just reviewed it and did not seem to be very happy about it.

I assumed Dustin wrote it, but he says he didn't enter and his review on it wasn't very flattering, but still, I wouldn't be surprised at all if he turns out to be the writer.

Quoted from Dreamscale NO WAY!  Sandra just reviewed it and did not seem to be very happy about it. I assumed Dustin wrote it, but he says he didn't enter and his review on it wasn't very flattering, but still, I wouldn't be surprised at all if he turns out to be the writer.

I was joking about Sandra writing that. If she's in hers could be White Icing in Blackwater Creek

Dustin's could be Junkyard.

Quoted from khamanna I was joking about Sandra writing that. If she's in hers could be White Icing in Blackwater Creek Dustin's could be Junkyard.

Yes...both good guesses!

So, we're guessing now?

I thought maybe George wrote Junkyard.

At the same time the theme was announced I had the blinding flash of inspiration for a short based on a book I had just read. I wouldn't have had time to write that and try and think of one of the challenge so I sorta cheated and went with my idea. I did stick to the 4 char max (and some people thought I tweaked the reality of my story to fit that but there's a perfectly good explanation anyway)  It was interesting to read some reviews that actually tried to look for the 'fish out of water' theme in mine and found one lol.

So if I hadn't of read this certain book the week before, I wouldn't have written this new script - which I poured a lot of heart and effort into; it was nearly 3 pages over 12 when I finished so had to scrimp and cut for an hour. And I probably wouldn't have been able to think of a decent one to strictly fit the challenge so mightn't have entered.

End result is I got off my arse for a change - hadn't done any writing since the last challenge - and ended with one of my best shorts I've written.

Quoted from stevie End result is I got off my arse for a change - hadn't done any writing since the last challenge - and ended with one of my best shorts I've written.

Red on Yellow must be yours then. But wait, no, JEStaats wrote that. So, yours is Did Everyone Pay Their Dues.

I wonder why you didn't end the title with a question mark though.

(this is so much fun, I can do it all day)

Quoted from khamanna (this is so much fun, I can do it all day)

That's great! I used to think that was the most fun part to. It's also easier to do when there are not 30 or 40 entries.  

Quoted from Grandma Bear That's great! I used to think that was the most fun part to. It's also easier to do when there are not 30 or 40 entries.

I guess that Pia wrote Dream.

Quoted from Grandma Bear That's great! I used to think that was the most fun part to. It's also easier to do when there are not 30 or 40 entries.

10-15 entries really made the difference for me. Too bad you're out or we would do it together!)

Quoted from Dreamscale I guess that Pia wrote Dream.

I didn't enter, Jeff and I'm sorry about as I like to try to support the OWCs.

Mine ended up way too short. It was about a Khardashian wannabe woman, perfectly groomed and dressed, who wakes up in the middle of Ocala National forest where some bored hunters who can't wait for hunting season to start create their own hunt. A spoiled, narcissistic, consumerism addicted waste of a human, in their eyes.

She has to figure out how to get out of the forest using orienteering skills, which she has none, while the hunters hunt her. We never see the hunters because one of the rules is the woman cannot see the hunters or the hunter will be out of the game. That was mine.

I read five, but only commented on three, I think.