Fight that Phobia

You must write a properly formatted script between 6 and 12 pages, not including the title page.

The scripts are due on Friday, October  20 at 11:59PM Baker Island Time (the last place that it is October 20th in the world) and must be submitted to: SimplyScripts.com/OWC.

Theme:  Fight that Phobia
Genre:  Drama, Thriller, Horror

PARAMETERS:

Concept - A character must possess and fight some kind of phobia. And, your last line of dialogue should contain "Rest in Peace". It could be a part of a longer line i.e. it may read "Rest in Peace, you son of a b****" or be anything else, it just needs to contain this particular expression. Any kind of line/lines containing Rest in Peace will do. Abbreviation will do as well. See the list of possible phobias here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_phobias and here: http://www.fearof.net

Budget: Open
Timeline:  Friday October 20 at 11:59PM Baker Island Time scripts are due.

Free to submit.  One entry per person.

There will be a review page emailed to you for you to score the scripts you read.  Please only give scores to scripts that you have read. You should not review your own script.

This isn't a contest - it's a challenge.  There are no official prizes.

You can revise your script as many times as you wish up until the deadline.

Do not put your real name on your script, this is an anonymous challenge.  However, please use your real name when submitting your script.  After the challenge closes you can either have your script removed or resubmit your script with your name on it.

Participants are strongly encouraged to read and comment/review the other scripts submitted.

Please put (c)2017 on your title page.

Best of luck and I hope everyone enjoys this challenge.

Two hours early?  

Here's a list of phobias.   http://www.fearof.net

Good luck everyone!

Quoted from khamanna PARAMETERS: Concept - A character must possess and fight some kind of phobia. And, your last line of dialogue should read �Rest in Peace�. It could be a part of a longer line i.e. it may read �Rest in Peace, you son of a b****� or be anything else, it just needs to contain this particular expression. Abbreviation will do as well. Budget � Open, but limited to real-life existing structures and creations.

Very interesting! The last line of dialogue requirement will get old after reading a lot of entries, but it's a neat twist. I can't wait to see all the different interpretations!

Since someone's going to ask anyway, real-life existing structures and creations...so, no sci-fi horror or virtual reality thrillers? Still existing or ever existed?

Quoted from Grandma Bear Two hours early?

Yes.  because midnight GMT is 4:00 am Baku, Azerbaijan time...  So, discussion board members have a two hour head start on everyone else.  

Not bad...not bad at all.

I'm in!!!

Quoted from ReneC Since someone's going to ask anyway, real-life existing structures and creations...so, no sci-fi horror or virtual reality thrillers? Still existing or ever existed?

That was a mistake on my part.  It has been removed.  Budget is open.  Yes, Sci-fi horror and virtual reality thrillers, etc.

It's 2am here in Azerbaijan. I can't trust myself anytime later than that))

Good luck to all, hope you enjoy the challenge!

And, I'm ready for your questions. Hope you come up with something good for me. Something that will make me think and later possibly hate you. And make me want to fight you. Physically.
Please.

Quoted from ReneC Very interesting! The last line of dialogue requirement will get old after reading a lot of entries, but it's a neat twist. I can't wait to see all the different interpretations!

It can be part of a longer line.  If someone ends with just "Rest In Peace" I'm pretty sure the writer will get savaged (unless they do something pretty cool in the preceding line).  I may modify it to should contain... rather than read.

- Don

Quoted from khamanna It's 2am here in Azerbaijan. I can't trust myself anytime later than that)) Good luck to all, hope you enjoy the challenge! And, I'm ready for your questions. Hope you come up with something good for me. Something that will make me think and later possibly hate you. And make me want to fight you. Physically. Please.

Thank you Khamanna, sorry my geography was so bad.  I had Azerbaijan farther west...

Don

A phobia.... of phobias.

Quoted from Don Thank you Khamanna, sorry my geography was so bad.  I had Azerbaijan farther west... Don

I mean now it's 2am. Midnight GMT is 4am, so you had everything right!)

Quoted from ReneC Very interesting! The last line of dialogue requirement will get old after reading a lot of entries, but it's a neat twist. I can't wait to see all the different interpretations! Since someone's going to ask anyway, real-life existing structures and creations...so, no sci-fi horror or virtual reality thrillers? Still existing or ever existed?

This was a parameter I had in my last OWC, and I thought it was a great idea, yet many didn't abide by it.

What it means, quite simply is that you can't go "creating" inventions and the like that don't already exist.  Basically, it keeps things real.

The last line of dialogue requirement is somewhat limiting. Most stories are going to end with the antagonist dying. Or, worse, there will be tack-on endings just to incorporate it. Or, the cheesy route, with the phobia being the thing that rests in peace.

I'm not religious and am naturally averse to helping spread deceit. What does RIP even mean, exactly? Rest in peace because you're dead and are buried 6 ft underground inside a coffin? They believe we go to heaven when we die... well, how long does it take to get there? Is there a queue at the gate? When does the resting in peace come into it? They seem confused. Not that that should be surprising to anybody sane.

Can't we just have fun with the phobia thing?

Quoted from DustinBowcot The last line of dialogue requirement is somewhat limiting. Most stories are going to end with the antagonist dying. Or, worse, there will be tack-on endings just to incorporate it. Or, the cheesy route, with the phobia being the thing that rests in peace. I'm not religious and am naturally averse to helping spread deceit. What does RIP even mean, exactly? Rest in peace because you're dead and are buried 6 ft underground inside a coffin? They believe we go to heaven when we die... well, how long does it take to get there? Is there a queue at the gate? When does the resting in peace come into it? They seem confused. Not that that should be surprising to anybody sane. Can't we just have fun with the phobia thing?

Understood and somewhat agreed.

My suggestion would be that the "Rest in peace..." line come into play at some point in the script, not necessarily the end.  At the end, it really does funnel the scripts into something of the same.

What y'all think?  

Love the phobia theme. Really not a fan of the "rest in peace", it's so cheesy.

It's a parameter. Only a big deal if you want it to be imh. You don't have to be overly religious to use RIP.  It could be used in a number of ways, for comic or ironic effect.

That said, contained in the script might be better than conclude with.

Good on ya Kham!

I will let Khamanna make that decision when she wakes up.

- Don

I'm Scared.

I like the RIP requirement more than the phobia one. It will be quite the challenge to come up with a script that concludes with this expression without having a generic ending. Tasty!

Even though RIP is not an Islamic expression. We use "May God have mercy on ..." But I can still make an attempt to relieve the confusion. People don't go straight to heaven or hell after they die. Their souls remain in a realm between the two known ones, this life, and the afterlife. This realm is like a waiting room. You just lie in your grave and wait till the judgment day come. And the judgment day comes only after the test is over for the last generation of humanity. So you "Rest in peace" in this realm, in your grave, if you were nice. If you weren't, your waiting period will be shitty too. Unfortunately   :(

Maybe my explanation will inspire some stories for this challenge.  ;D

Edit: This realm has a scary name in Arabic. It's called "Al-bar-zakh" For inspiration!

This should be interesting. I apologize ahead of time for my entry. It's gonna be gross.

~Zack~

Quoted from DustinBowcot The last line of dialogue requirement is somewhat limiting. Most stories are going to end with the antagonist dying. Or, worse, there will be tack-on endings just to incorporate it. Or, the cheesy route, with the phobia being the thing that rests in peace. I'm not religious and am naturally averse to helping spread deceit. What does RIP even mean, exactly? Rest in peace because you're dead and are buried 6 ft underground inside a coffin? They believe we go to heaven when we die... well, how long does it take to get there? Is there a queue at the gate? When does the resting in peace come into it? They seem confused. Not that that should be surprising to anybody sane. Can't we just have fun with the phobia thing?

Please don't ask me to change requirement like that as the writers have only seven days to come up and write their scripts and you might be putting them on hold.

In my experience the lack of parameters made it harder to come up with something. Phobia is not much to work with especially when there are so many phobias out there.If  RIP guides your creativity towards a particular scenario then all the better as it's an October themed OWC. At the same time I agree with LC, don't let it stifle you - your RIP might be ironic.

We had a similar challenge at MP - the scripts had to have "Go to bed, Taylor" at the end. It produced a huge variety.

About RIP being religious or not - I'm not religious either but use it all the time. I won't go in there, it's a wildly used expression by now.

Quoted from Dreamscale Understood and somewhat agreed. My suggestion would be that the "Rest in peace..." line come into play at some point in the script, not necessarily the end.  At the end, it really does funnel the scripts into something of the same. What y'all think?

I won't be extremely strict about that, but no, not at some point in the script, it should be at the end. Might be not tge very last sentence of dialog, but at the end all the same. The character who said it may say something after his "RIP" or any other character may say something after.
Otherwise the requirement looses the point in my mind.

Sorry, guys, if it's not to everyone's liking. It's impossible to accomodate everyone)
But go on, continue with your questions please.

Just don't ask to drastically change the requirement)

It has hit me like a potato cannon to groin. Get your helmets on.

~Zack~

anyone deal with any real phobias?

I have a fear of vomiting. ironically i can count on 1 hand the times i've been sick...and haven't thrown up in over 20 years.

I've never been put off by a challenge before but I have too much other stuff going on, including a rewrite of a feature - that I'm being paid for. I'm midway through the 2nd draft of a mid-school novel I'm writing and the 2nd draft of a sci-fi novel. I'm working on countless shorts that are geared for production and the horror feature is coming up this winter, there may be rewrites for that any day now. Not to mention all of the other stuff going on including a chess tournament all day tomorrow and league games several evenings this week. So I suppose I don't need much of an excuse to count myself out of this one. Good luck to everyone else.

Quoted from DustinBowcot I've never been put off by a challenge before but I have too much other stuff going on....

Yeah, I'm sure I fell for this kinda line last time. You sure sound busy but... Well, it'll all come out in the wash.

I'm a bit confused by the RIP requirement and still none the wiser reading the comments.

Does the script have to end with the final line being someone saying 'Rest In Peace' or with someone dying?

Quoted from MarkRenshaw I'm a bit confused by the RIP requirement and still none the wiser reading the comments. Does the script have to end with the final line being someone saying 'Rest In Peace' or with someone dying?

Glad you asked!
No need for a dying person or anyone dying (but if you want to have someone dying then do so - up to you). I changed "read Rest in Peace" to "contain Rest in Peace". Any kind of line with Rest in Peace will do. Any character can say it. And if that or any other character speaks some more after saying his RIP it's fine as well.  

Does it answer your question?

My Daddy always said I was stupid to be scared of cheese. May he Rest in Peace.

Quoted from khamanna Glad you asked! No need for a dying person or anyone dying (but if you want to have someone dying then do so - up to you). I changed "read Rest in Peace" to "contain Rest in Peace". Any kind of line with Rest in Peace will do. Any character can say it. And if that or any other character speaks some more after saying his RIP it's fine as well.   Does it answer your question?

Yes! That clears it up for me, great!

I think over the years I'v developed a fear of OWC Pissers, I hope to see that phobia in one of these stories

Khamanna...

I see... you're “running the show”  MOD.  Congrats.  

Well, if you're gonna play in a circus --someone's got to be the "Ringleader"...  everybody else is clowns...

All joking aside, I like it, I'm in.  

_ghostie

Ghostie!
Long time no see. Glad you decided to participate. We may have a lot of girls in. Let's see)

Quoted from khamanna Sorry, guys, if it's not to everyone's liking. It's impossible to accomodate everyone) But go on, continue with your questions please. Just don't ask to drastically change the requirement)

I agree with Khamanna on this one.  A change in the requirements means changes in several other places and usually someone fails to get the word.  

Also, part of the conceit of the OWC is "A producer with a wad of cash and an idea...  Like.  'I want it to be about fear and I want it to end with something like, "RIP"'."

- Don

Excellent challenge. Busy week but I'll do my best.

In real life, I have arachnophobia. When I was a little boy, I put on my t-shirt one morning, only to realize that there was a giant spider inside it. The shirt was tight across my chest and the spider was caught inside it, scrabbling around on my skin.

I like giant spiders in movies, but normal-size, on film and in life, they're super stressful for me.

I've had an idea. Going to try and write the first draft tomorrow as I also have some spare time. Those two events coinciding on a weekend have never happened on a OWC before! I normally get an idea on the Thursday and then desperately try to get it done in a day. This feels weird, like the they've changed the Matrix or something!

I have an abnormal fear of snakes. Looked up the word - it's ophidiophobia. And it seems to get worse with time. I can't watch Snakes on a Plane now, no way.

Graphophobia - fear of writing... I suffer from

Graphopisserphobia - fear of pisser writing... not this guy

Quoted from Don   Like.  'I want it to be about fear and I want it to end with something like, "RIP"'." - Don

Oh no, you mean...like as in... tear, strip, torn, or dare I say...split

Now that’s got a whole deal harder  

How about Orphanaphobiaformatus - the fear of Jeff's review.

Quoted from khamanna I have an abnormal fear of snakes. Looked up the word - it's ophidiophobia. And it seems to get worse with time. I can't watch Snakes on a Plane now, no way.

I have a fear of cute kittens, vanilla ice cream, and women in cat woman cosplay costumes...

- Don

Does the person dealing with the phobia have to be the main character?

~Zack~

Quoted from Zack Does the person dealing with the phobia have to be the main character? ~Zack~

No, it doesn't. The requirement says "A character must posess" -  sticking by it)

My folks are getting new flooring this week, so unfortunately, I'd "bet the farm" I can't commit. However, I do have a seed of an idea I might write after the OWC.

Plus, I'm invested in TCM's horror marathons. Right now, Scream Blacula Scream is on.

Good luck to everybody.

Quoted from Don I have a fear of cute kittens

Man! Hope it's not about my avatar. But I was thinking of changing it though.

Here's where I stand on Rest In Peace thing

I'm not crazy about it either. I'd prefer Burn In Hell, but that's just me I 'spose. However, it is the last line. Something that can be easily zapped out after the OWC is over. As for e, I was severely tempted to name a character Weston Peece, but then I got sober.

You can use Burn in Hell and Rest in Peace in the same sentence, Darren.

And a character can speak some after that. Or some other character. Make it the ending, but there's no strict rule about that phrase being the very last.

Finished the first draft. Kinda pleased with it. Gonna play around with it over the next few days and get it spruced up nice.

My first short script, Five Day for Redemption, had the protag kill everyone then say this cheese line: "And all I wanted was some ice cream."

So, cheese at the end, count on me!  

Don1...Don Juan. Wonder if Don had some interesting experience lately.  

Quoted from Grandma Bear Don1...Don Juan. Wonder if Don had some interesting experience lately.

Not Don1. don1. Like eldave1 and ryan1

don1

I guess it's time to find some obscure phobias.

What is the phobia called when you're scared of men in their mid 50's wearing really short, tight old denim cutoffs?

Quoted from Dreamscale What is the phobia called when you're scared of men in their mid 50's wearing really short, tight old denim cutoffs?

Aussiphobia

Quoted from Dreamscale What is the phobia called when you're scared of men in their mid 50's wearing really short, tight old denim cutoffs?

Quinquagenarianjortsaphobia?

Quoted from Dreamscale What is the phobia called when you're scared of men in their mid 50's wearing really short, tight old denim cutoffs?

I dunno bro but lots of people in Arizona have Soggybushophobia:

A fear of nude screenwriter critics drunk in jacuzzis

I love the fact that the phobia of long words is a long word.

Hippopotomonstrosesquippedaliophobia

Imagine that. You have this fear of long words and wonder if there's a phobia for it. So you head over to Google and then run screaming in terror lol.

Had a friend review my OWC. He loved it until page 7 then said it jumped the shark so now I'm torn. Do I try to make it lest jumpy sharky or completely change it...and if so, what to change it to?

Quoted from MarkRenshaw Had a friend review my OWC. He loved it until page 7 then said it jumped the shark so now I'm torn. Do I try to make it lest jumpy sharky or completely change it...and if so, what to change it to?

Possibly your friend has a sharkophobia.

lol - or Sharknadophobia!

I have a fear of jumping sharks.

I finally came up with my concept last night, and now have the story and characters worked out.  The girlfriend even likes it and didn't mention anything about jumping sharks or jumping the shark, so I'm ready to get going.

I had a concept right away but have only just worked out the story. Well, for this short...my first story would take about 90 pages. So who knows, this might end up being a future feature.  

Quoted from ReneC I had a concept right away but have only just worked out the story. Well, for this short...my first story would take about 90 pages. So who knows, this might end up being a future feature.

I have similar fears on page length.

It started all fine and good but the more I brainstormed, the longer it got and now I fear it could actually be a feature

I've got a pretty bizarre story in my head. Not sure if it's gonna work, but fuck it. It's kitchen sink time. I get off early tonight. Gonna head straight home and try to get the first draft finished.

~Zack~

I'm on the same boat, Zack. Not sure if my script will click either but I'm putting it out there anyway.
-Julio

I'm so torn with my ending as I'm getting quite radically different viewpoints about it from people I've asked to read. So I'm going to write two endings and then probably flip a coin before submitting one.

Should the name of the phobia be mentioned anywhere? I'm asking because mine isn't too obvious, but it is listed in the links in the OP.

Quoted from Dreamscale I have similar fears on page length. It started all fine and good but the more I brainstormed, the longer it got and now I fear it could actually be a feature

I wish I had the problem of accidentally writing a feature.

Quoted from Steven Should the name of the phobia be mentioned anywhere? I'm asking because mine isn't too obvious, but it is listed in the links in the OP.

Good of you to ask!
We should be able to see that your character has a phobia. No, you don't need to name it anywhere in the script, not unless you want to.

Quoted from MarkRenshaw I'm so torn with my ending as I'm getting quite radically different viewpoints about it from people I've asked to read. So I'm going to write two endings and then probably flip a coin before submitting one.

Or, you could choose 1 of the endings, write it in, then have your character wake up and realize that ending was just a dream, and go onto your 2nd ending as the real ending.

Quoted from khamanna Good of you to ask! We should be able to see that your character has a phobia. No, you don't need to name it anywhere in the script, not unless you want to.

Ok well thanks. I ask because there are levels to a phobia. I'm scared of the ocean, but I don't freak out at the sight of it. I only begin to slightly panic when I think about being stuck out there and not knowing what's underneath.

That isn't what I'm writing about, but just wanted to bring it up.

Quoted from Dreamscale Or, you could choose 1 of the endings, write it in, then have your character wake up and realize that ending was just a dream, and go onto your 2nd ending as the real ending.

Never go full Dallas.

Quoted from Steven Ok well thanks. I ask because there are levels to a phobia. I'm scared of the ocean, but I don't freak out at the sight of it. I only begin to slightly panic when I think about being stuck out there and not knowing what's underneath. That isn't what I'm writing about, but just wanted to bring it up.

I get what you're asking now.
I have a scare of heights. It's not so mild one, only today I was on the 4th floor balcony and couldn't lean on the railings to look down. However I was able to climb The Hanging Lake in Colorado which is up on a rock and you hike some, then there's a kind of thin and steep path up to the lake. I'll also be able to look downd from high up if I need to it's just that I'll always have that feeling that I might loose it and jump. So, I deffinitely qualify it as a phobia.

If that answers your question in any way.

Quoted from khamanna I get what you're asking now. I have a scare of heights. It's not so mild one, only today I was on the 4th floor balcony and couldn't lean on the railings to look down. However I was able to climb The Hanging Lake in Colorado which is up on a rock and you hike some, then there's a kind of thin and steep path up to the lake. I'll also be able to look downd from high up if I need to it's just that I'll always have that feeling that I might loose it and jump. So, I deffinitely qualify it as a phobia. If that answers your question in any way.

It might be a stretch, but my ending should clarify the phobia.

I'm writing about the rare but very real fear of beaver's teeth or a single tooth.

It will be very horrific.

Steven, I modified your post a bit as the challenge is going to be anonymous.
I think yours qualifies very well but you know how it is - it's up to the readers to decide. Good luck to you with it!)

Quoted from khamanna Steven, I modified your post a bit as the challenge is going to be anonymous. I think yours qualifies very well but you know how it is - it's up to the readers to decide. Good luck to you with it!)

Thanks, forgot about the anonymous part.

Can two people partner up and co-write an entry?

I have not come up with any good ideas yet... still brainstorming.

Regarding mentioning the phobia. Why not write your logline and then simply add the phobia after it.

Jeff, a ladies man...living in Arizona, has to confront his biggest fear, an Australian man in denim cut-offs on the golf course. - Steviephobia

The reason I'm suggesting this is due to previous experiences with the OWC and MP contests. If you don't name the phobia you chose, there will be some readers who will mark down your score simply because they can't find it on the list or don't want to do research.

Don't know about the co-write, Dena. That's up to Khamanna.

Cheers writers!

Quoted from Grandma Bear Regarding mentioning the phobia. Why not write your logline and then simply add the phobia after it.

Hey, Don might post the given phobia right in each script's thread; perhaps behind the genre reference. I imagine so because I saw a text box in the submission form, asking for the phobia, right under age rating, see here…

http://www.simplyscripts.com/unpro_short_exercise_17_10.html#submit

Otherwise, a hard challenge you set, Kham. I think the hardest part for the writers is to reach a wide audience because a phobia is something pretty specific… and it's hard to make it "universal".

Quoted from Grandma Bear The reason I'm suggesting this is due to previous experiences with the OWC and MP contests. If you don't name the phobia you chose, there will be some readers who will mark down your score simply because they can't find it on the list or don't want to do research.

Both of these won't be my subject but let's say we don't name the phobia anywhere in the script. Instead, you clearly visibly show Character X scream and jump on top of a chair when they see a mouse. Do we have a "very observant" Character Y who says " I guess that person  has a case of musophobia" Or we show someone in a full sweat at the sight of a scarecrow. Character Y will say to X "I never knew you suffered from Formidophobia!"

Right?
Right.
The question may not be giving readership pause to look it all up, but rather reading it without getting tongue tied.

That's my two sense.
However
Maybe we should put the phobia in our message when submitting, if that helps.

I found labeling the phobia too on the nose, so I wrote it out. You'll still get a sense of the phobia, just not someone saying "Hey, you have XXphobia!"

Done with the second draft. Time to let it marinate and revisit later. Kinda on a fence with this one.

I think if your character is scared of something we should be able to get it's the phobia. Maybe Don planned something about indicating the phobia next to the entry, I don't know. Prussian says the link to submit asks you to indicate your phobia. If you're still not sure we'll see it have it on the title page in brackets maybe.

Dena, about the co-write - I don't mind at all unless there's a protocol against it on SS. If you ever done it before at OWC then go ahead write your entry with the cowriter. If not I'll wait for Don. If it's up to a challenge mod - I say yes.

[quote=me]Regarding mentioning the phobia. Why not write your logline and then simply add the phobia after it [/quote=me]

I agree, it could go right after your logline. I'm waiting for Don on that.

Submitted, don't think I'll need to edit it before Friday either. Looking forward to this one.

Questions answered:

The name of the phobia will be included in the listing. You'll see the question addressing the phobia in your script when you submit.

@Dena - co-writing is fine.

Also, just in case - it's one entry per person unless you manage to sneak one in by Don.

Thank you for the questions or I was getting bored here)

Quoted from khamanna [quote=me]Regarding mentioning the phobia. Why not write your logline and then simply add the phobia after it [/quote=me] I agree, it could go right after your logline. I'm waiting for Don on that.

The entry form at SimplyScripts.com/OWC has a slot to put the phobia.  I was going to include it in the listing along with the ratinge, e.g.,

Sophie's Curse Anonymous 5

Sophie finds true love online only to discover her lover's fears will forever keep them separated.  9 pages in pdf format   (Young Adult rating) Equino-Podo-Kabourophobia




Don

I wrote most of one last night but I don't like it. I do like what I did with it from a filmmaker perspective, it's the story that's weak.

I have so many ideas for this one, I have another one already cooked up and will try writing that.

Quoted from Don The entry form at SimplyScripts.com/OWC has a slot to put the phobia.  I was going to include it in the listing along with the ratinge, e.g., Sophie's Curse Anonymous 5 Sophie finds true love online only to discover her lover's fears will forever keep them separated.  9 pages in pdf format   (Young Adult rating) Equino-Podo-Kabourophobia Don

What if there is more than one phobia? Do we list them all or just the most important one?

Quoted from ReneC What if there is more than one phobia? Do we list them all or just the most important one?

You don't have to unless you want to. The main goal is not to let people think there's no phobia in your entry whatsoever so that they don't mark down for it.

Well - got something done between a thousand other things. Look forward to the reads. Just need to get over my Allodoxaphobia.

Done and submitted. Hopefully we'll have a few good scares in the mix. Good luck everybody!
~John

Quoted from JEStaats Done and submitted. Hopefully we'll have a few good scares in the mix. Good luck everybody! ~John

Yea I completely forgot about the horror genre, went with straight up drama. Going for the bleak!

Quoted from Pale Yellow Can two people partner up and co-write an entry? I have not come up with any good ideas yet... still brainstorming.

Sent message

B

So far, ZERO words written, but I think I'm about ready to get to it...tomorrow.