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Tommyp
Posted: August 10th, 2009, 5:48am Report to Moderator
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Okay guys, I have an idea.

To stay creative, I was thinking that I would write and post a poem every day on the board. I would have a specific theme or word or group of words to use in the poem, different every day.

I will attempt to do it for two weeks.

The poems will be all genres, I might have a different genre each day, until I run out of the main genres.

The poems will be varying in length, depending on how much time I have and how I feel.

I want people to join me! Please, join me, it will be fun and get your brain working. If you like the theme and genre on any of the days, please post in this thread. It would be great if you could post a poem every day, but if not, that's fine, whenever you can.

I will be starting this Thursday (Aus time).

Click on the day to go to that page and read the poems.

DAY 1: Troubles in the mind.

DAY 2: The Walk Home.

DAY 3: There's always someone cooler than you.

DAY 4: Love or lust.

DAY 5: Memories.

DAY 6: Self Deceit.

DAY 7: Ghosts.

DAY 8: Fast and Slow.




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It's all yours Tommy.  You have the floor (or the thread as the case may be)
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Thanks Michael.

I don't know much about the forms or genres of poetry, but here they are on wiki:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Poetry#Forms

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Poetry#Genres

If people want to give me a challenge by making up a theme one day that would be really good.

DAY ONE:


The theme for today poem is, a bit dark. "Troubles in the mind."

EDIT: So, just to be clear, I just picked a theme and I hope to write and post a poem here on that theme, by the end of the day. I encourage others to do so too.


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My mind if often troubled
And as blank as my verses
Poems are not limericks
Or Corks for that matter
Must they rhyme?
I see no reason
Able to duck but not quack
In Tyler I trust
I hope I'm not
Or gay for that matter
Will not overcome my mind
By now you will think me troubled
But not as much as I do
Boo hoo
Doodedoo
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mcornetto
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Too many voices, the
rabble in my head is
out to get me
undermining my foundation
by placing invisible
listening devices
everywhere.
Stop them please!

In case you read this
note, destroy it.

Too late for me,
however, you may
escape their clutches.

Make no mistake,
I am not crazy.
Nevermind what the
doctors say.
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The troubles in my mind are ones I can't explain
Without certain pieces, I complain about the pain
But once handed that prescription, my composure I regain
The only trouble with this is I never feel the same
Personalities change, like people do with age
My mind is the cage, I'm the rat, starving and enraged
Deranged, people can't identify me anymore
If you need the white oval, I got plenty plenty more
Score, once I've scored, my wallet becomes piss poor
Spending all this cash on different medicines galore
I can't afford to waste away, dealing with this pain anymore
Coz even after I pop that oval, I still feel sore
The message is as clear as the crystals frozen in place
Except these crystals don't melt away, they never can erase
The way it tastes, the way it numbs my pale face
I wish I could escape, these troubles in the mind just aren't safe

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I mask my insecurities with humour,
My confidence issues with wine.
I cover up my low self esteem with friends,
And entertainment to conceal my troubled mind.

I act stupid and foolish to get laughs,
All because I don’t know how to properly interact,
My mind with all its problems,
Doesn’t allow me to relax.

I spend all my nights awake,
Thinking about work the next day,
Nothing I try helps me,
The troubles in my mind just won’t go away.

I wish that for just once,
I would not have to suffer,
But then I see the silver lining,
That every troubles makes me tougher.


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Tommy,

Thank you so much! It's nice to know I'm not alone!

I will be saving your poem and the others posted here. This is a wonderful thread!

Here's my contribution:

A Troubled Mind

There seems to be a randomness…
….  . … .. … . …. .. . . …

We think--

and it troubles the mind
It's what we call asymmetry
It starts in what is time

It's in the second level
It's where our thought begins
It there descends in purpose
A cumulative vim

A vim that knows no boundaries
It washes on the shore
Of conscious disposition
Of love and angered roar

We think--
… … …

For the ark is double sided
And with it Good and Evil
That are not interchangeable
But peace then from upheaval
… … …

Why? Lama?
… … …
We think--
… … …

A troubled mind has need
A need that's very great
And from this need
Comes purpose
We sail upon this lake

The lake bears in it
Levels-four
Here discover number lore:
-Purpose
-Value
-Concept
-Thing
Without so which
A song won't sing

We think--
… … …

Seven notes in music trails
Seven levels
Weighted scales
Right then left
We juxtapose
A troubled mind
That learns and grows

We think--
… … …

Asymmetry
So right and wrong
With troubled mind
We sing life's song
In perfect randomness

We think--

... ... ...

Sandra E.





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mcornetto
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Ok.


  • It's the next day in oz.
  • Tommy wants suggested themes.
  • I have an idea for one.


So.

The next theme is "the walk home".


and if you haven't joined in yet, don't be afraid to hop in any time.
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Great poems guys! I'm loving this.

Thanks Michael, interesting theme. I am feeling this might be more of a ballad, story kinda poem. Don't know the official term.


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The walk home
Of a tired soldier
Paved with intention
Littered with regret

The walk home
Of a jobless father
Stymied by shame
Doomed by dignity

The walk home
Of a motherless child
Battered by brothers
Pissed by parents gone

The walk home
For those who suffer
Would be better
If you were there


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A haiku (just 17 syallables, no set metric pattern):

At Work
A long, hard day.
Not too long now.
I'm looking forward to my walk home.

EDIT: some more haiku I just came up with - all thoughts during a walk home. Just trying to slip into the mind of different characters, different situations:

Family Home
This was our garden, once.
I used to climb that tree.
The gate was black, then.

End of the Date
I'm not even listening to whatever she's saying.
Too happy.

Coming Back from the Churchyard
It was a lovely service.
Everyone agrees
She would have liked it.

Stone in My Shoe
There's a stone in my shoe.
A fitting end to the worst day of my life.

How Did We Die?
We were holding hands.
Your skin, my skin...
I didn't even see the bus.

The Jubilee Line
Bloody Underground.
Never works.
I really should buy an umbrella.

Detour
Walking through the park takes longer.
But some things
Don't have to be shortcuts.

Relationship Issues
I wonder.
If I got hit by a car, right now,
Would she even care?

Still Small Voice
The trees whisper.
Perhaps we could learn their secrets
If we just listened.

Just a Blown Bulb
This street-light isn't working.
I pass into darkness...
Then out again.

Local Knowledge
Someone jumped off this bridge once.
They climbed up on the ledge...
And then they fell.

Self-Referential
Oh, how I love my walk home.
One day I'll write a haiku about it.

13 in one hour! I'll try a different form for tomorrow's theme. Thanks for starting this thread, Tommy.


Guess who's back? Back again?

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I walk, run, rest, the pattern continues.
Three weeks, six weeks, it’s really hard to tell.
Is home a figment, of my imagination?
Or is home real, a secure place to dwell.

I know it’s mostly my doing,
But it’s way too late to moan,
It’s hard to tell direction,
The GPS is broken on my phone.

As I sit here and tell you this,
Asking for your support,
I can’t give much in return,
But I promise not to retort.

I ask for a dollar or two,
And a direction in which to head,
Because being homeless is hard,
No warmth, no food, no bed.

I understand if you can’t help me out,
I’ve heard all the excuses before,
It’s just that the walk home is never ending,
I just wish for one night, to not be so sore.


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I did not see that man,
the one eating from the can,
when I walked all the way
home to my house today.

He does not have a house,
And no kids and no spouse,
And no job, he’s lazy.
Either that or crazy

Because he talks to air,
Really, nobody was there.
That one time he grabbed me
He smelled like poo and pee

I struggled to escape
And started screaming, “Rape!”,
That’s when he let me go
I ran like hell, you know.

He didn’t chase after,
But I did hear laughter,
I turned toward the sound
and saw him on the ground.

Was he having a fit?
He’s laughing like a git.
“What’s wrong?” I called to him,
My face all taut and grim.

And still he laughed at me
How rude could someone be
I turned, started walking
And then he started talking.

“I’m a woman” he said
Out of his laughing head.
I turned and looked his way
Or her’s what I should say.

On my walk home there was
No man or can because
There’s a homeless woman
And her name is Sue Anne.
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the walk home tonight was different than the rest
and I feel like I need to get this bit of info off my chest
to be honest, there's a lot of things I need to address
like the homeless man who's trigger finger nearly pressed
he could have killed me, decided to let me go
now I realize I cannot wander to and fro
in the world today, it might not be safe in alleyways
so maybe, just maybe, i should ride the subway trains
and stay away from those body bags, and blood outside my veins
that are much like wine, and leave permanent stains
but this stain left behind won't be on a carpet
because the stain would center around my heart, that's the target
i got a blunt, so let's spark it
maybe it'll give me a bit of light in this darkness
a darkness that used to surround me on that long walk home
now when i walk home, i memorize this little poem
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