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Thanks Cindy, that makes perfect sense. I don't think I was clear enough though. I don't necessarily want people to realize that they are the same person. It comes as somewhat of a twist. I put the eyes in there as one of the clues.
To be honest, this is going to trip you up... You have to realize you aren't writing a clever novel with twist and turns, but a direct blue print of a movie and what "WE" see. Can it still be clever? Yes, of course. But it should also be almost elementary in obvious deliver of what's important to each scene. We have to see everything that's important or we risk losing it all.
Sorry, I should also mention it's all very clear that they are the same person when it is supposed to be. The color of the eyes is just a little hint. It's not really a thing that people have to remember or else nothing will make sense. I'm just trying to have my character descriptions have some payoff later in the script. I'm not trying to be clever or write a novel.
Thanks for the pointers though. I will keep it in mind as I continue writing.
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