Do you have an unproduced feature or short?

Do you need help with your logline?

A logline is the FIRST THING a prospective producer will see.  Make it stand out!

I am offering my services FREE to the FIRST THREE WRITERS who contact me for help.  One script per writer.  Why FREE?  So I can begin building a reputation.  If you like what you see, all I ask is that you provide positive feedback and refer me to a friend.

What do you have to lose?  Nothing!

The first three writers who contact me will be asked a few brief questions about their script.  I will then formulate and provide them with a professional logline they can use.

I look forward to helping you!

Barry - never one to look a gift horse in the mouth, I'd be up for it and be happy to provide feedback... I'll PM you too.

Anthony

Anthony -- I look forward to helping you!

Bogey -- I received your private message and have responded.  Looking forward to helping you!

ONE open position remaining...

OK, Barry, I'm always up for a better logline.

Count me in!

Am I the third one or someone else beat me to it via PM?

Dreamscale -- I just sent you a PM.  You are number three!

Khamanna -- Unfortunately, you were not one of the first three, but I would encourage you to reach out to the others to see whether or not they recommend my services

Logline services... whatever next?

Members here would be better off posting their loglines and allowing the community to come up with variations.

Writers paying to have somebody write for them... wow.

Quoted from DustinBowcot Members here would be better off posting their loglines and allowing the community to come up with variations.

And we do have a good logline thread somewhere here. I received solid advice there once.

How about any references? Since the author claims the loglines are "professional" ...

http://www.imdb.com/name/nm3735326/

This is he... made a few shorts. So now he's taking that valuable experience and cashing in.

Let's see what he can do before throwing rocks at the guy.

He's going to provide a logline for me on a script that is very, very hard to write a logline on that doesn't give too much away, but also makes it compelling to read.

He will write a professional log line, that's what he will do. So effing what? If any writer here cannot already do that then I dread to think what the script looks like.

Just another failed writer that believes they can teach other writers how not to fail.

I would always take free advice on a log line.

I would never pay for advice on a log line.

Quoted from eldave1 I would never pay for advice on a log line.

Ditto...