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Posted: February 12th, 2017, 2:28pm Report to Moderator
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Using 'very' weakens the sentence. Try these instead.

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Disco Cactus
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Pretty interesting. I definitely need help with my action lines. I feel like I over writer them and they grow repetitive. I'm gonna study this list and expand my vocabulary.

~Zack~


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cool list (very cool


My Scripts can all be seen here:

http://dlambertson.wix.com/scripts
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So, what are you writing?

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Quoted from Female Gaze
Using 'very' weakens the sentence. Try these instead.




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I see the intended image.

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Female Gaze
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i see it too?

hmmm...it could be your cookie settings
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Quoted from Female Gaze
i see it too?

hmmm...it could be your cookie settings


It was my browser settings.  I see it now.  

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Damnit, get to the point!

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Good stuff. Thx.
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