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Zombie Sean
Posted: January 20th, 2008, 1:36pm Report to Moderator
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Hey Zack thanks for reading. I don't know what's happened to this series....I've just...put it off, I guess...Haha. Maybe I should start with a clean slate.................I DON'T KNOW.


I'm glad you're enjoying it though.

Sean

P.S. I'm glad (and surprised) you quoted a part of my review for The Cure. Haha. That makes me feel special.
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Zack
Posted: January 21st, 2008, 12:51pm Report to Moderator
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Action packed zombie-fest!

This the episode I've been waiting for. Tons of action and even more gore.

What's even better is that you've sacrificed none of the story in the process. The characters have finally filled out and each one is likeable in there own way.

I'm guessing that dialogue isn't your strong suit as it is still pretty bad. Also, I didn't like how quickly Drake(my favorite character, damn you!!!) accepted the fact that he was going to die. He didn't seem to really care.

Overall, best episode yet. You should definetly continue this series(maybe a second season or something). I'm sure any who give 'Infected' a chance will enjoy it.

~Zack~
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Okay, I'll be gentle here because this script is obviously two years old, so here we go...

Nice, creepy setup, with the old 'memory loss AIEE monsters' trick. I also liked the staggered introductions, tied together by that pretty icky scene with the vultures and the carcass - and how that all loops back into what's going on by the end of the episode, which is some great foreshadowing.

The dialogue suffers from being very on the nose - a little flat and characterless. You also rush into using the word 'zombie' before we've gotten a good look at what's out there. Some of your grammar also trips itself up, but the direction and action flows nicely and is visual enough to help push the sometimes weak dialogue along.

So! While this lacks the presentation touches that I like, and the dialogue needs a bit of work in places, overall this is actually a well-crafted setup and a good start to things.



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