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Overall, well-written.

One nitpick.... I almost think Dennis would downplay what happened to everyone else in favor of his harrowing experience, rather than stating he got off easy. I mean, he's really the biggest narcissist of the gang.

I especially liked Charlie and Mac pulling up to the hospital, but then finding out they're at the storage bin.

I would've liked the red dye to have more relevence, like a previously setup joke that comes to fruition, but it's not a deal-breaker or anything.

Otherwise, hysterical, consistent, and well-written!


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