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Don
Posted: December 10th, 2016, 12:02pm Report to Moderator
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WoMAN of the Cloth by Robert McBride - Series, Drama, Pilot - A transgendered Pastors Wife goes to extreme lengths to hide her secrets from her bigoted husband who desperately wants another child.  64 pages - pdf, format

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Posted: December 10th, 2016, 12:55pm Report to Moderator
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It's not who will let me; It's who will stop me?

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I'm on page 25...and DAMN!

These people are fucked up and I love it!
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Absolutely loved reading this! Once I started I literally couldn't stop.
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Oh MY GOD!  This was A selected read for my class and We ALL loved this! So visual and vivid. The writer captured the tone of the story and... and everyone in this story, except AVERY,  is a piece of shit. It reminds us of ‘Shameless’... anywho, kudos to the writer — a few classmates would like to interview Robert if possible. USC baby!
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What an odd discussion board.

The author (McBride) has posted two scripts. Has made zero posts on other scripts and has not responded to any comment.

"Jaime". Has made a total of two posts:

On this script - 12/18/2016.


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Absolutely loved reading this! Once I started I literally couldn't stop.


And on Robert's other script on 12/19/2016


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Great short! This is the 2nd piece of your work I've read so far and I really enjoy connecting with you characters and storylines.


That's Jaime's entire interaction with SS.  A total of 18 minutes online.

Along comes GetLazed.


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Oh MY GOD!  This was A selected read for my class and We ALL loved this! So visual and vivid. The writer captured the tone of the story and... and everyone in this story, except AVERY,  is a piece of shit. It reminds us of ‘Shameless’... anywho, kudos to the writer — a few classmates would like to interview Robert if possible. USC baby!


Who has a total of one post (the above).

The script itself was posted over a year ago. The writer has found two huge fans who, ironically, only interested in his work. Hmmm.

Would love to hear Robert's feedback to them. I think they deserve a response - at least a thanks. As a note - I took a look at the first five - an error here and there but overall solid writing. Not at the OMG! level. But solid.



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Dustin
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Action speaks louder than dialogue.

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Code

MS goes to a very specific location.



This isn't very specific. It would be better if the precise location was specified. I'm trying to picture this in my mind but then the image halts at this point... because I don't know where this specific place is.
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Quoted from Dustin
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MS goes to a very specific location.



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Dustin - what are you referencing here?


My Scripts can all be seen here:

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