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The Summoner by Richard Russell - Series, Drama - A man who summons the souls of the dead helps in the capture of a serial killer. - pdf, format

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I read the 1st 10 pages.  Few questions.  Why are you using a Catholic Priest and nuns as your summoner?  This makes your story unbelievable in my opinion.  What kind of priests summon the dead?  This is totally against the Christian faith.  Also are you African American?  Because if you're not, I'd be insulted by Antown's family's dialogue.  It's like they're stuck in the 1800's and don't know how to put a proper sentence together.  I don't know if you have an interesting concept or not because I just couldn't get around those points.
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