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Posted: May 20th, 2018, 12:00pm Report to Moderator
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Friends - The One With The Comeback by James Klonowski - Series, Comedy - Ross and Rachel tie the knot, An unexpected guest moves in next door to Chandler and Monica, and Mike has a run-in with the kids' babysitter. 28 pages - pdf format

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Hi.

I'm a Friends freak.

Read your teaser. Monica announcing to Chandler she cleaned everything is strange as it's what she does every day, although "Monica clean" is a nice phrase.

the fact that she told him about Richard that way - doesn't ring true. I'm pretty sure if Richard moved in she'll be trying to conceal it from Chandler. That could be a fun thing to watch by the way. I'm fairly sure that announcing it to Chandler is not going to be her first move. But your call.
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