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Mr.Z
Posted: August 10th, 2010, 1:21pm Report to Moderator
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Yeah, I've written lots of features, but they all suck balls. I recently finished my last one, hoping this would be "the one".

I'll be seeking out feedback in a month or so, after I do one last polish. If you're interested let me know and I'll send you a copy when it's ready.

("Mr.Z" was a character and the title of the first thing I ever wrote. Not a script, a short story in spanish: "El Señor Z")


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screenrider
Posted: August 10th, 2010, 1:45pm Report to Moderator
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Quoted from Mr.Z

I'll be seeking out feedback in a month or so, after I do one last polish. If you're interested let me know and I'll send you a copy when it's ready.


Sign me up.  

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Mr.Z
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Shameless bump to let you guys know this has been shot and it's currently in post-production.

Meet The Miss:



The Sheriff (and Lydia!):



And The Outlaw:



Hopefully, I'll can show you the film in the next couple of months.  


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Dear God that looks stylish. And 'The Miss' bears a more than passing resemblance to Jessica Alba.

Congrats!


Guess who's back? Back again?
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Yeah, I've written lots of features, but they all suck balls.


I very much doubt that, having read your previous. Depends whose balls you're comparing em to. I look forward to the end of post production.

Good luck. I doubt you'll need it.

R ox


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OMG, those characters posters are awesome! Congrat!


FEATURE:

Memwipe
- Sci-Fi, Action, Thriller (114 pages) - In a world where memories can be erased by request, a Memory Erasing Specialist desperately searches for the culprit when his wife becomes a target for erasure -- with his former colleagues hot on his trail.
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This looks great, Congrats Matias.

Hopefully you can sort out some kind of password system on Viemo..something like that..so we can get a look, even if it's only for a day.
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Congrats, Matias

Wanted to say that I still remember to completely finish your feature and give you some notes on it. I read a couple of pages and am impressed by the sci fi element you have in it. I remember being entralled into it. lol. I will re-read it again to see if I can give you better notes than this crap that I wrote right now.

Gabe


Just Murdered by Sean Elwood (Zombie Sean) and Gabriel Moronta (Mr. Ripley) - (Dark Comedy, Horror) All is fair in love and war. A hopeless romantic gay man resorts to bloodshed to win the coveted position of Bridesmaid. 99 pages.
https://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-comedy/m-1624410571/
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Hey Mr. Z,

Thanks for the bump and the read.
Saucy dialogue and appropriately sparse description.
Reads like butter, but that ending is flat as a dry pancake.
Its just not up to the level of prowess in the rest of your fine material.

That being said, super congrats on the production.
Well deserved and looking forward to more of your material!

Regards,
E.D.

P.S. Lydia's origin story for the sequel!


LATEST NEWS

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is producing a short based on my new feature!

A list of my scripts can be found here.
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Breanne Mattson
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Congratulations Matías,

I’m not the slightest bit surprised. Are they going to promote you as “award winning screenwriter Matías Caruso”?


Brea


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screenrider
Posted: October 11th, 2010, 12:55pm Report to Moderator
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Congrats, Matias.   You're an inspiration to us all.  

I'm green with envy.  >
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wow, looks fantastic, i'd be really proud to have an end product that looks like that.


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Excellent!!!! Looks great!!!!  


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Matias,

Gonna just echo everyone else here. That looks great. Nice screen shots... The Miss is smoking hot.


James


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rendevous
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Just read this again. I hate you, you talented git.

I can write fast, but I don't write like this. Fine work. I still hate you, by the way. In a sorta Morrissey "We hate it when our friends get off their arses and get it done" typa way. You understand. Yeah, thought ya might.

Keep it up. Plenty of room for all. People love good stories. Always have, always will.

R ox


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New Used Car

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