Bad Best Friends by Zachary R. Jansen - Short, Drama - Three friends comes to terms with a decision that could ruin their relationships. 10 pages - pdf, format

Hey,
I was really into this one until the sudden shift in tone near the end. Didn't see that coming one bit. I didn't feel like taking it to that level fit into anything you had previously established.

A couple of typo's throughout, but overall both your dialogue and descriptions read really well, it was just the last third of the story that came out of nowhere. The banter between Paul and Dan was great, it had a nice rhythm to it.

Thought the Elmo stuff was funny, but was hoping for an explanation of why exactly he was doing what he was doing to poor old Elmo.
Solid effort and look forward to reading more of yours in the future,
Nate