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trickyb
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Hey Mark,

Great little sketch, very funny.  


P2 Jesus pulls back his finger - at first glance I thought it said - Jesus says pull my finger, I thought, h,m interesting a counter temptation - would the midget have pulled his finger?

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Quoted from trickyb
P2 Jesus pulls back his finger - at first glance I thought it said - Jesus says pull my finger, I thought, h,m interesting a counter temptation - would the midget have pulled his finger?


I like that thought, maybe i'll use it in a future episode

welcome to SS and thanks for the read

Mark


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Don
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What!!!

I want more....tell me the real thing will follow?

Good photography by the way.

What's happening....


My scripts  HERE

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Looks great!


Anthony Cawood - Award winning screenwriter
Available Short screenplays - http://www.anthonycawood.co.uk/short-scripts
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In Search of Hysterical Jesus?


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Wow! Thanks Don
Sorry Bill, it's been entered into a lot film festivals and as I no longer own the rights I only get to see what the director gives me  

I haven't seen the full film myself.

Thanks guys


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Looking good, Irish!

I mean, really pro. I also wanted moore...   Ha, my stupid tablet did that so I left it in.


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Congrats man. That looks really good.


Just Murdered by Sean Elwood (Zombie Sean) and Gabriel Moronta (Mr. Ripley) - (Dark Comedy, Horror) All is fair in love and war. A hopeless romantic gay man resorts to bloodshed to win the coveted position of Bridesmaid. 99 pages.
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So I agree with alffy about that opening paragraph.  The forty days/nights part we can't know.  The tattered clothes and exhausted look on his face is enough IMO.



Merely writing 'tattered and exhausted' does not tell a full story. Without the forty days and nights part, then how exhausted and tattered would the actor know how to be? Not all information in a script has to be for the viewer, IMO.

Well done on getting this filmed, I'll check it out tonight.
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This looks great, and Like Libby said, very professional. Can't wait to see the full version. Inthinknits gonna be a hoot! Congratulations.

Steve


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Looks great, seems funny.

Look forward to seeing the whole thing. Great job.
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That trailer is pretty amazing, Mark!  Where in the world was that filmed?  It's a great look, for sure! Congrats!


Some of my scripts:

Bounty (TV Pilot) -- Top 1% of discoverable screenplays on Coverfly
I'll Be Seeing You (short) - OWC winner
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Skip (short) - filmed
Country Road 12 (short) - filmed
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Great trailer, Mark! You should be super proud!
I still remember reading your funny short back in the day.
Can't wait to see the completed film.
Please keep us up to speed on the project.

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Quoted from Libby
Looking good, Irish!

I mean, really pro. I also wanted moore...   Ha, my stupid tablet did that so I left it in.


Aha I see what you did there
Thanks Libby


Quoted from Gabe
Congrats man. That looks really good.


Thanks Buddy


Quoted from Dustin
Well done on getting this filmed, I'll check it out tonight.


Thanks Dustin


Quoted from Steve
This looks great, and Like Libby said, very professional. Can't wait to see the full version. Inthinknits gonna be a hoot! Congratulations.


Thank you kind sir... now get back to 'the Followers'


Quoted from Demento
Looks great, seems funny.

Look forward to seeing the whole thing. Great job.


Thanks... I look forward to seeing it myself


Quoted from Gary
That trailer is pretty amazing, Mark!  Where in the world was that filmed?  It's a great look, for sure! Congrats!


GARY!!!! what's happening bro? This was shot in Dumont Dunes north of Baker,  California, or so I was told


Quoted from Brett
Great trailer, Mark! You should be super proud!
I still remember reading your funny short back in the day.
Can't wait to see the completed film.
Please keep us up to speed on the project.


Hey stranger, what's going on Brett?
You were one of the first to comment on this and helped me clean up a few punchlines.

Greatly appreciated.


This short has been entered in all the major film festivals in the US. Got turned down from Sundance which is the big one... apparently though they accepted a farting corpse movie, because Daniel Radcliffe is in it

Thank you all for your kind remarks, as soon as I see the full movie, you'll be the first to know





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