Screw Sundance. They don't know what they lost. Good luck with the others.

California? Great scouting. It looks like the middle east somewhere. Looks amazing!

There's an area in New Mexico, not too far from Albuquerque, if I remember correctly that looks just like how you'd imagine Mars. I swear all the movies made to look like Mars were shot there. All the sand and rocks are a rusty red and nothing grows there. The western US really has some incredible looking landscapes!

The script is actually pretty funny.  I went back to look and liked it a lot.  Nice one.

This production looks great so far.  Will be curious to see what they do with the rest of it.

Hey Mark,
     Thanks for sending me the links to your stories.

This was funny.  Really funny.  And the promo looks amazing.  You did a great job.

I read all the comments too.  I'd like to add a few:

1.  You should have some indication this is his 40 days and nights walkabout.  Why not a voice over, by the Devil?

2.  I liked the gags, sort of.  The bubble-wrap stuff was funny.  The others were okay.  I'd go with women, rock and roll, and something else, and have Jesus be a smart ass to Satan.  

I think the only thing that I didn't care for was that Jesus was just like "Be gone Satan."  and didn't really say something clever back.  Why would he believe that Mary would say something bad about him, or do you mean his "wife"  Mary?  I initially thought it was Mary, his mom...

Other then that, great job.  It was funny, it was a fast easy read...

Dan

ps, great job getting it made!!