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BenL
Posted: June 19th, 2016, 6:47am Report to Moderator
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The setting is great, visually stunning.

Other than that: clean writing, proper formatting (not really sure about the newspaper insert thing tho as I don't use this kind of stuff), well done for a one page short script. But like the others already said there should be a bit more depth to the story.
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I loved the writing - very descriptive. I saw everything you wanted me to see.


My Scripts can all be seen here:

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Warren
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Thanks, Ben and eldave for the read and favourable comments. Very much appreciated.


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Warren
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I am very excited to announce that Lullaby was picked up by Sinister Films two days after being submitted to Simply Scripts.

Casting will start next week, with filming anticipated to start mid to late July.

This is a great crew, and I look forward to seeing this project come to life. I know it is in good hands.

I have added a link to Insomniac, Sinister Films first project, and Pig Man, their most recent.
Insomniac is another SS script, written by David M Troop.

Insomniac by Sinister Films

Pig Man by Sinister Films



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Nice Warren, us SS newbies gotta represent! Lol. Look forward to seeing this filmed. Don't think I know David but if he's a regular here I'll check out Insomniac too.  


That rug really tied the room together.
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Very nice, Warren - congrats!


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Well done and good luck.
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Thank you.

Very exciting times ahead, that's for sure.



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Sorry for the bump, but as this is my first script to ever be produced, I just had to share.

Casting is done! I'm very happy with the look of the actors. Kaylee looks slightly older than I imagined in the script but it will still work well.

Filming will start very soon.

Lullaby will also be filmed under it's original name, Hush. I initially decided against Hush because there is a movie that came out this year with the same name. After talking it over we decided Hush just fit better and the two pieces really have nothing to do with each other.

Very exciting.


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Very cool


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Warren
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Hush (Lullaby) has been filmed

That's two filmed in less than a month, good times!!

Thanks SS, I've only been a member for three and a bit months.


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Nice job, Warren. Keep em simple, keep em good! Congrats!


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Some unedited frames from Hush (Lullaby), filmed a week and a half ago.

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Looks suitably gruesome and macabre.    

Congrats.


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Warren
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Here is the teaser trailer for Hush. It looks amazing, even if I do say so myself



https://vimeo.com/183439395


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