I think this has a lot of issues.
Straight away your logline reads awkwardly, "after being nearly dead".
INT. BEDROOM - NIGHT
Roxy is preparing herself to get up for school.
What is it, Mom?
Youíre going to be late for school.
Iím not getting up.
Of course, you are.
At a time like this. This is
Youíve never ask me that question.
Iíve never did.
This is a very small section, but I skimmed and the problems are throughout the script.
It's pages and pages of dialogue. The very little action is passively written.
You need to introduce your characters in capital letters, give us an age or rough age, and a description always helps.
Two of the talking characters have no introduction at all.
Your very first action line is unfilmable. How would we know Roxy is preparing herself to get up for school?
The dialogue is on the nose and awkwardly written.
Then after about page 7 you are missing pages till about page 22.
Sorry, but at the moment this is an unreadable mess.
I think you would benefit from reading a lot more scripts and articles on screenwriting. Maybe also skim through your upload to make sure itís all there.
All the best.