Hi Cooper,

Thanks for the read, I thought this script had died the slow death it deserved so I was surprised to see it at the top of the pile again.

Like you, most reviews have had an issue with the ending.

I'm glad there was a lot you seemed to like and you have made me consider revisiting this down the line. I'll have a think about the ending and see what I can come up with.

Anything you would like me to take a look at? Not really reading features at the moment but happy to read a short.

Could you take a look at just the first act of the thing I'm working on (about 20pgs - http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-workinprogress/m-1501286942/). I'm hyper focused on that section.

Otherwise I'll just shoot you a line when I write up a good short. Cheers!

PS - this thread won't die because the script is good. Just go with it lol.