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Fausto
Posted: November 7th, 2017, 3:51pm Report to Moderator
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Dave, funny premise. I enjoyed it. This is what he needs, a visit from the past great presidents. And a note to him saying "You're fired, go back to Russia!"
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Thanks much


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Trump is hard to parody since his real life behaviour usually puts anything anyone comes up with to shame. However, very good job here. You embraced his real life antics and didn't make any gross (well maybe a little gross) exaggerations about his character that weren't necessary. He usually does a great job of making himself a laughing stock anyway.

It's a nice sketch that could really shine with funny actors. And of course, Alec Baldwin as Trump... those Baldwin lines could be "meta" then!

Scripts like this make me really thankful to be a Canadian
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Quoted from Cacutshaw
Trump is hard to parody since his real life behaviour usually puts anything anyone comes up with to shame. However, very good job here. You embraced his real life antics and didn't make any gross (well maybe a little gross) exaggerations about his character that weren't necessary. He usually does a great job of making himself a laughing stock anyway.

It's a nice sketch that could really shine with funny actors. And of course, Alec Baldwin as Trump... those Baldwin lines could be "meta" then!

Scripts like this make me really thankful to be a Canadian


Thanks. mate - glad you enjoyed it.


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