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FrankM
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Has been optioned for production.


Optioned the same day Bernie Sanders declares his candidacy. Suspicious


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OscarM
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Hahah, I'm not associated with Senator Sanders in any shape, way or form. Thanks, guys!


More of my scripts on the link, please let me know if you'd like to read one of them! https://www.scriptrevolution.com/profiles/oscar-moreno
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Well done. Did they find the script here on SS or elsewhere?


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OscarM
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Well done. Did they find the script here on SS or elsewhere?


Thanks! And yes, they found it here.


More of my scripts on the link, please let me know if you'd like to read one of them! https://www.scriptrevolution.com/profiles/oscar-moreno
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Congrats, Oscar.

It's remarkable the number of scripts that get discovered on SS.


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This was fun. With the right direction and casting, it could be very funny. I do think the end needs some work. It falls a little flat for me, as is, but the script itself is well-written and flows nicely.

RE: the satire, I think a strong directoral vision could give it some ooomph in that department (maybe with the visual of Trump), and the same with Jack and his leanings toward Trump and MAGA (or not).

Overall, I think there is room for some subversion of how Trump is viewed here (is there any humour to be had in him having a moment of self-reflection, for example?); that may not be the direction you want to take it in, but just a thought.

Look forward to seeing the final cut! Good luck.


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Congrats, Oscar.

It's remarkable the number of scripts that get discovered on SS.


Thanks! I hope there's more to be discovered in the future, mine and everyone's!  


More of my scripts on the link, please let me know if you'd like to read one of them! https://www.scriptrevolution.com/profiles/oscar-moreno
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This was fun. With the right direction and casting, it could be very funny. I do think the end needs some work. It falls a little flat for me, as is, but the script itself is well-written and flows nicely.

RE: the satire, I think a strong directoral vision could give it some ooomph in that department (maybe with the visual of Trump), and the same with Jack and his leanings toward Trump and MAGA (or not).

Overall, I think there is room for some subversion of how Trump is viewed here (is there any humour to be had in him having a moment of self-reflection, for example?); that may not be the direction you want to take it in, but just a thought.

Look forward to seeing the final cut! Good luck.


Thanks for the feedback, Andrew! I'm glad you found it fun!


More of my scripts on the link, please let me know if you'd like to read one of them! https://www.scriptrevolution.com/profiles/oscar-moreno
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