Cindy,

Jeez Louise, that was dark. Maybe I should have seen the end coming, but I didn't. Don't know if I'm just slow on the uptake, but it threw me. Good job there. Mara tapping the boy's baseball cap was a stroke of evil genius! loved it, and it read extremely well. Good job here! I liked it a lot.

Steve

Quoted from SAC Cindy, Jeez Louise, that was dark. Maybe I should have seen the end coming, but I didn't. Don't know if I'm just slow on the uptake, but it threw me. Good job there. Mara tapping the boy's baseball cap was a stroke of evil genius! loved it, and it read extremely well. Good job here! I liked it a lot. Steve

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
I'm hoping the feature will measure up. As I write, things keep getting worse for the boy and her, but I'm trying to find a good way for Richard to get revenge. I think I've got it figured out though.

Thanks for giving it a read,
Cindy

I didn't guess the end in as much as I got a 'new idea' while reading. A 'wouldn't it be cool' moment. Then, I hoped that the story wouldn't finish like that so that I could use 'my idea'. However, sadly for me, the story did go there, and it wasn't 'my idea' after all.

Lol, Dustin. You're funny.
Glad you liked it.
Cindy

I literally groaned when you did go there, haha. I was already writing a version in my mind.

Quoted from DustinBowcot I literally groaned when you did go there, haha. I was already writing a version in my mind.

Darn it. Lol
Sorry