Skip: Issues abound. This is not close.
INT. TORONTO NIGHT
- The FADE IN comes first.
- The scene heading is not formatted correctly. Should be: INT. TORONTO - NIGHT
- How is "Toronto" an interior location??????
Freddie is in the hospital for treatment and
Dr. Pearlstein is having a conversation with him.
There is a blank line in the middle of this sentence.
Freddie should be CAPPED as well as Dr. Pearlstein. All character names are CAPPED when first intro'd. Also some description of the characters certainly would be helpful.
No need to number scenes.
Okay - I'm going to stop. There are issues throughout. I don't mean to be harsh, but you need to learn some of the basics.