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Posted: January 25th, 2018, 2:24pm Report to Moderator
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Zombies in Love by Fausto Lucignani - Short, Horror, Romance - After two centuries since their deaths, two lesbian zombies meet in a cemetery and fall in love.  5 pages

production: Shoestring production  3 zombies and one location - pdf, format

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So that just happened... I don't have the words.


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Quoted from Warren
So that just happened... I don't have the words.


The words are: "odious liquid" and "dark, coagulated blood" and "awesome".

Somewhere there is a film student sitting on ten gallons of stage blood and zombie makeup that needs to find this script.

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bert
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Haha.  My only problem is that I am not getting why this has so much dialogue.


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10/10. Somebody get this in a theatre so I can watch it.


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10/10. Somebody get this in a theatre so I can watch it.


Really so that's where the bar is. Wow.


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I wish it was a feature!
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Actually now that you mention it, why wouldn't I want to watch 90 minutes of two dead humans groaning at each other and being intimate while their rotting bodily fluids leak out of them.

You make a very good point.


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ugh.Not for me


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Don't wanna say too much here, lest I come off as taking an intentional lark too seriously. I also haven't reviewed anything here in a while, so I don't know if "Writer interested in feedback" has proved a reliable indicator that the writer is indeed around to read it. What I will say is that I agree with Bert. The dialogue's gotta go. I straight up didn't read it.


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First of all, thank you very much for reading my script! You have been very courageous indeed...but, please, let's give the zombies a chance to express their feelings through dialogue. The two women want to spend their deaths together.
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Lmao, nice one Fausto... thats the very first lesbian zombie, incredibly soft porn short ive read 😁.  P.s the dialogue is a liitle on the nose....😊


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Hi Kirsten,
thank you for reading this unusual story. Regarding the dialogue, I see your point but please keep in mind that this is the way zombies talk...very simple and repetitive.
Best regards,
Fausto
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Khamanna,
thank you for your suggestion...a feature zombie script is not a bad idea...I have to think about an original story.
Thank you for reading.
My best,
Fausto
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Quoted from Warren
Really so that's where the bar is. Wow.


I think there's a lot to be said for a simple story told simply. The ladies love each other even in death -- it's a nice idea and it's well-expressed in a visually interesting way. To me it's the same impulse of total sincerity that drives great movies like Before Sunrise or Brawl on Cell Block 99.


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