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Don
Posted: November 20th, 2017, 11:37am Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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The Seven Brains of Dr. Fuku by Robert Braverman - Short, Sci Fi - A Mad Scientist uses a collection of brains for their psychic power to disrupt the universe. 4 pages - pdf, format

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Robert - this isn't close to being ready - format issues, typos, etc abound.


My Scripts can all be seen here:

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There's some great videos on Youtube about writing and formatting screenplays. Here's a good one.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NJO1wyuAIpw&t=1138s


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Robert,

The following sample script may be of some use to you.

http://www.oscars.org/sites/oscars/files/scriptsample.pdf

I hope this helps.

All the best,
Marty
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Robert,
I concur with the other reviewers, the premise is good for a sci-fi script but you seriously need to revise the format, writing and overall style. If you work on these issues, you can have an exciting script.
My best.
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