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The Apartment by Brandi Self - Short, Thriller - A technology obsessed couple show up to their sublet in a new city, but soon notice that something about the apartment is terribly off - putting. 11 pages - pdf, format
Apologies for the delay, I just got my login for discussions. Not sure what happened, it was in perfect format before I uploaded (final draft PDF). I sent a request to replace it and it should be up shortly.
Thanks for your interest in reading and your patience!
The beginning and the middle are very funny and work very well.
I'm not sure about the ending. They started "seeing" each other and then went back to looking for ways out to hook to the world. Also the very end - it's quirky but somehow too sarcastic. Maybe they get hooked on and people don't recognize them? Or already buried them and have memorial service. Online memorial service or something. Just tossing the ideas out there. I wish the ending has to do with the online world I guess. But very funny script nonetheless and an engaging read.